Talk:Pow (Elvana Gjata song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Yet another review of an old nom! --K. Peake 07:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "and produced by" → "while produced by"
 * "was applauded by" → "received positive reviews from numerous" or something similar, per the usage of selected in the body and the small amount of critics
 * Wikilink music video
 * Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK and the US introduction, as everyone knows where that place is
 * "the song found commercial success," → "the song achieved success," and remove the Switzerland position per it being too low for lead notability

Background and composition

 * "on her social media in" → "on her Instagram in" per the source, with the wikilink
 * "was noted by a critical commentary" → "was noted by critical commentary"
 * Add a source at the end of the last sentence for the runtime
 * "garnered positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
 * Remove website introduction to Illyrian Pirates and attribute the review to someone, preferably "the staff of". Also, what exactly makes this source reliable?
 * "The website pointed out that its her" → "The staff went on to point out her"
 * Remove website introductions to Dosja and Top Music, also attribute reviews to someone; you could use something like "a writer for" instead of the staff to be less reptitive
 * "were the most focusing" → "are the most focusing"
 * "ending 22 February 2022," → "ending 20 February 2022," per the source

Promotion

 * Retitle to Music video per this being the only form of promotion listed
 * Wikilink music video on the img text and remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
 * "An accompanying music video for "Pow"" → "A music video for "Pow""
 * "having been also credited as" → "who also received credit as"
 * Remove wikilink on New York City
 * "across the city, including at the" → "across the city, including the"
 * Again, attribute the Illyrian Pirates review to someone
 * "and commended the Gjata's fashion" → "and commended Gjata's fashion"
 * Remove the word Greek before Mikropragmata
 * Remove introductions to Njeshi and Gazeta Metro, attributing the reviews to someone per earlier
 * "similarly lauded her fashion noting" → "similarly lauded her style, noting"

Track listing

 * Remove this section because it is a one track single and the length is sourced in the body

Personnel

 * Are there enough persons credited to create this section?
 * Section created. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, after reviewing this decent article! --K. Peake 09:30, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey, thanks for your review. I solved your comments! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I take no issue with the sources used now! --K. Peake 20:44, 20 April 2022 (UTC)