Talk:Power-off accuracy approach

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mnqly14.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:38, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Feedback on your article
Nice to see you building something up from scratch? I guess you're a pilot or interested in flying?

I made a series of small changes to your article and I renamed it so that it matches the Wikipedia rules on article names. You can look through the history to get a sense of what I was up to.

The big issue is that the article basically relies on a single source. Even if it's just to establish the notability of the subject I think you would really benefit from adding at least 2-3 more reliable sources that discuss or define the subject.

Otherwise, I think this is a pretty good start on your article. You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is helpful. Try to add a few sources, do a final pass and try to address any of those things that you think are useful. Then go ahead and create the article live in Wikipedia. Good luck! — m a k o ๛  00:01, 14 February 2020 (UTC)

Hi Mako! Thank you for the review. I took your advice into consideration and made some minor changes to my article. Let me know if you think it's ready to be moved over. --Mnqly14 (talk) 00:04, 16 February 2020 (UTC)