Talk:Power & Control/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: (CA)Giacobbe (talk · contribs) 02:35, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Hey Wiki, I'll be reviewing this! -- Gia co bbe  talk 02:35, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

General

 * Looks like there's a disambiguation link to correct

Lead and infobox

 * "Diamandis collaborated with Steve Angello while writing the track" — Just a suggestion, but it may be beneficial to let the reader know he was a member of Swedish House Mafia? Try "Diamandis collaborated with former Swedish House Mafia member Steve Angello while writing the track".


 * Rest of lead and infobox looks good

Background and composition

 * Same thing just about Angello

So just fix those little things and this should be an easy pass.-- Gia co bbe  talk 02:52, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Good work, passing!-- Gia co bbe  talk 02:44, 9 May 2014 (UTC)

Comment from non-reviewer
"So So Gay" (refs #14 and #18) is not considered a reliable source. I would replace those. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 18:53, 8 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Dylan Garner cannot be confirmed with any reliable sources, so that has been removed; I have replaced the citation for the chart position. WikiRedactor (talk) 21:17, 8 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Good work with the replacement. If the commercial aspects cannot be expanded beyond an incomplete paragraph, though, I would merge it into another section. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 22:27, 8 May 2014 (UTC)