Talk:Powerless (Heroes)/GA1

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And please leave me a note when done. Cheers, giggy (O) 00:09, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * "It was written by co-executive producer Jeph Loeb and directed by executive producer Allan Arkush, and aired on 3 December 2007 as the conclusion of the "Volume 2: Generations" storyline" - try to avoid having more than one "and" in a sentence.
 * "The episodes main storylines revolve around" - apostrophe for episode, and more than one storyline??
 * "compound in Odessa in search of the virus." - context. What's the virus?
 * "was originally conceived to be the conclusion of "Generations"" - what's generations?
 * Ref 4 needs a publisher.
 * "gave the episode an "A" grading, though he felt the episode" - a bit of repetition that could be fixed up
 * "Stephen Lackey of Mania" - not sure this is the article you want
 * All raised points have been fixed.  Corn.u.co.pia ♥  Disc.us.sion  08:16, 25 June 2008 (UTC)