Talk:Practice Date/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 01:53, 1 April 2010 (UTC) Hi. I'll be reviewing this article as part of April's GAN Backlog Elimination Log. See Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for my review style. Address the below comments; meanwhile, I've placed the article on hold.  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 01:53, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * Does Ann have her own article? And if not, wikilink to the character's list?
 * "digs up dirt" — a bit slang-ish, wouldn't you say?
 * "an improvement over the previous week's episode, "Beauty Pageant.""
 * Got them all. I also added some other missing wikilinks... —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Plot

 * Again, "find any dirt": bit slangish. Same with the later uses of the word.
 * Replace the period after "problem" with a colon.
 * "he's" → "he is"
 * "awesome I am" → "how "awesome" she is."
 * I'm a bit confused: did Mark dig up dirt on himself or Jerry?
 * Done. Let me know if the Jerry thing still needs further clarity. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Production

 * "features about" → "features approximately"
 * Done. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Cultural references

 * Quotes around "perfect ten"
 * Done. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Reception

 * Separate the ratings and the reviews.
 * Remove the second "together" in the IGN review
 * Done. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Images

 * One FU file (which is good) and one PD image (checks out)
 * Thanks! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  02:13, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Final say
Nice work! I'm going to go pass this. Congrats and happy editing.  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 19:05, 1 April 2010 (UTC)