Talk:Prancing Horse/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 21:08, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 13:32, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

I'll take this. Excited to review this; we need more automobile GAs. 750h+ 13:32, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

prose

 * lead
 * The design was originally created by Francesco Baracca ==> "The design was created by Francesco Baracca"
 * as an insignia to be ==> "as an symbol/logo to be" (more understandable to others)
 * later gave Enzo Ferrari permission to use ==> "later permitted Enzo Ferrari to use"
 * predecessor—since 1932, and was applied to the company's remove the comma


 * history
 * which existed prior to the pilot's ==> "which existed before the pilot's"
 * Baracca family paid him a visit ==> "Baracca family visited him"
 * became the first car to utilize the rectangular replace "utilize" with "use", per an excellent essay written by Orwell that is still as valid today as it was then. He outlined his "Remedy of Six Rules" for writers. Number two is "Never use a long word where a short one will do.
 * good terms with the Baraccas, who were patrons of the ==> "good terms with the Baraccas, patrons of the"
 * Baracca family gave him permission to use ==> "Baracca family permitted to use"
 * at the Military Academy of Modena, and Enzo's older remove the comma
 * Enzo's own rationale for adopting remove "own"


 * other uses
 * the same woman who gave Enzo Ferrari permission to use the horse ==> "the same woman who permitted Enzo to use the horse"
 * a specialty automaker ==> " a speciality carmaker" (British English)
 * the logo is in fact derived ==> "the logo is derived"

images
Could you add WP:ALT text to all the images? Thanks. 750h+ 14:04, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
 * One fair use image ✅
 * One public domain image ✅
 * One CC BY-SA 3.0 ✅


 * I'll implement all the changes you've suggested, thanks. Do you have any other concerns? Marisauna (talk) 22:37, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Congrats on the new GA! 750h+ 03:25, 14 July 2024 (UTC)