Talk:Pre-Madonna/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- CallMe Nathan   &bull;  Talk2Me   14:05, 18 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Will start at some point later today.
 * Reviewing? — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 07:48, 5 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Apologies... I had a bereavement in the family to deal with this. review will be completed soon.... --  Lil_ ℧ niquℇ № 1  [talk]  17:42, 5 February 2011 (UTC)
 * OMG! Please take your time. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 04:39, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Do you need someone to take over?-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   17:49, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Ideally yes... &mdash;  Lil_ ℧ niquℇ № 1  [talk] 
 * I will take it from here Unique. Don't worry, I'll cover for you. I'll have the review up probably for tomorrow.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   03:59, 15 February 2011 (UTC)

How's the review coming along? Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:45, 26 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Hi WizardMan. So the full review will be up tomorrow, and another editor, my freind BlackJacks101 will do the fixes recquired.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   00:11, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

Lead
✅--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC) ✅--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC) ✅--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The album was released in 1997 by Stephen Bray, who was the producer of the songs when they were recorded -> I mean they weren't released by him, better yet write it was released by him and distributed by Soultone
 * in the European countries -> remove "the"
 * Bray decided, Bray decided. Switch it up a bit

Background
✅--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC) ✅--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC) ✅--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
 * female vocalist, female vocalist, vocalist, female vocalist
 * This led to a dispute between Dan and her, resulting in Madonna leaving the band -> lead, leaving, there is a change in tense. Keep it consistent in each sentence
 * Now Madonna was determined - c/e

Composition

 * re-recorded -> how was it re-recorded if Madonna didn't know of the project?
 * It says that Madonna re-recorded the song for the B-sides of those songs....not that it was re-recorded for the album--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)


 * "Stay" and "Don't You Know" were combined into one song, "Stay", -> ?
 * Madonna combined those two songs into 1 song on Like A Virgin called Stay...those two songs are on the album separately in there original forms--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

Release and reception
✅--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Mark Egan from Rocky Mountain News felt that -> again tense issues. The quote is in present tense. To avoid issues "Mark Egan writes
 * Again on next review
 * Check the rest of them

Small article so small fixes. I'll check back after they are fixed.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   02:07, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I gotta go now, will continue later today--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I'm done =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Good job. Passing.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   21:23, 4 March 2011 (UTC)