Talk:Prem Rawat/Bio proposal/talk

Vassanya's comment on this draft as at 30 March
Some comments. This is a good general direction to move in. The material needed to be mercilessly edited and cut down. I would prefer to see a version with citations so I can follow the material to sources. On citations, I would recommend you stick with a variety and inline cite anything that could be contentious, gets into fine detail or is reporting a POV. Using a good variety of sources and in-line citations helps promote verifiability and stability.

The closing of the lede seems a little promotional, with two variants of the "peace" quote. That material would be better suited under the teachings section, for example. I believe the current ending of the article lede about the Foundation is preferrable.

While the trimmed childhood section is generally good, I would suggest you reintegrate two facts into it. The statement about primogenture I think is interesting and informative. Also, it may be good to include the mention that he was visited by Westerners during the 60s, which is what lead him to send a teacher to London.

In leaving India, I think the much more neutral tone is readily apparent. Much more reporting, much more clarity in the writing. Overall, I find this rewrite more informative. However, I believe you should restore the Time Magazine information. It's notable that such a prominent magazine reported on the worship of Prem Rawat by his family. I also believe the Sociological Review claim should be reinstated. They both present things about the guru that are highly criticized and do so with a neutral tone without framing them in an opinion about those facts.

I'll come back and provide comments for the second half a bit later. I want to make sure I look over that with fresh eyes, so I can provide good feedback. Vassyana 23:00, 30 March 2007 (UTC)

The "Leaving India" section is much longer than the other sections and is too long for it to fit on my screen. So I added another heading in the middle.Momento 04:40, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

And now I'm reordering a paragraph but keeping all material.Momento 04:55, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

There's still a bit of doubling up between the Getting Married section and Teachings. Another couple of kb might be saved there. Might have another look tomorrow. Rumiton 14:44, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

I'm also a bit disconcerted by the phrase "to appeal to a western context." The context is the background against which the appeal takes place, not the thing that is appealed to. Can't for the moment see a better phrasing. Rumiton 14:53, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for your help Rumiton. I enjoy this collaborative effort, as opposed to combative editing. The big test will come we try to replace the old article. Once this is finished there won't be much room for inserting POV.Momento 20:16, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

Thanks Momento, I enjoy the team thing too, when it works, as it does here. Rumiton 13:21, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

Just did a word count. This article comes in at 2400 versus the old article's 6300. I believe this article is the right length, it covers all the major issues in appropriate detail (obviously we can't include the thousands of pages of available material but this article, its sources and bibliographical references will enable any reader to delve deeper if they wish). So as to avoid this article suffering the same fate as the last one ie, editors constantly adding new material they think important until the article becomes "bloated" and "over long", I propose that we put an upper limit on this article of 2500 words. If any editor feels that something important has been left out, decide what should be removed to allow room for the new material and discuss the change here.That way we will keep the article well sourced but concise.Momento 00:16, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

I've returned Vassanya's comments to the top of this section as a reminder of what we're aiming for.Momento 00:19, 19 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I added one sentence to the end of the first paragraph to include mention of Knowledge, which wasn't mentioned at all in the lead. Sylviecyn 11:18, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

Yes, I was thinking of something like that too, Sylvie. Rumiton 14:08, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

I've been mucking around with the Westernisation section tonight, cutting out a bit of redundancy and condensing the rest. It's a bit chaotic right now, but please be patient. Ta (Australian for thanks.) Rumiton 15:11, 19 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Well I'm going to give A+ to SylvieCyn, a B+ to Rumiton based on continuing work (Westernisation was always happening but finally occured in '83) and a C to Jossi. The Rolling Stone insertion takes up six lines to say what the "my knowledge is God" says clearer in one (addressing the Hoffman's quote). In comparison to the rest of the article it stands out as "bloated". If you want it Jossi, you're going to have to fight for it.Momento 19:46, 19 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I stuck in the "Getting Married" headline to provide a break and end the "Leaving India" section. Mainly for visual and readability reasons. I find it easier to read articles if an entire section can be seen in one screen shot. Also "Getting Married" was a turning point for Rawat (splitting from mother, affect on followers etc).Momento 20:06, 19 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I just put in a necessary Downton quote (22) which now makes 3 Downton cites for the one paragraph. Is there a way to encompass three quotes with only one blue cite number?Momento 20:28, 19 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Can you not just cut and paste the other two into the first area, then delete the numbers? I thought the Getting Married section was a good idea. Looking back, Rawat's marriage was extrememly significant to his work, and a lot sprang from it. I'm still looking at Westernisation. As you say, it is a large part of the story. It might need to be broken up into more sections. Thinking. Rumiton 03:04, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

While waiting for Vassyana (sounds like a stage play) I thought it might be good to look at the section headings. Westernisation needs shortening, and the contents don't fit too well, I think. I also thought that Teachings should come higher up. How about this sequence of headings:

Prem Rawat... Teachings... Childhood... Initiation... Organisations (DLM/EV)... Marriage... World Travel... Recent Years. Rumiton 13:00, 20 April 2007 (UTC)


 * My preference is to relate everything to PR, it's his life story. So I don't like "Organisations" being a heading. I'd be happy to see "Teachings" come last, so that people read first about Rawat and then his teachings. "Initiation" occures in "Childhood", so how would that work. "World Travel" starts in 71 and hasn't stopped so I can't see it as a heading. I see the major periods as being -
 * Prem Rawat
 * Childhood 57 - 71
 * Leaving India 71 -74
 * Getting married? 74-83
 * Westernisation?(Ashran close, DLM=EV, drops Guru etc) 83-2000
 * Recent Years 2000+
 * Teachings

Momento 21:25, 20 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I think I've found a good solution. The key point wasn't "Getting Married", it was Rawat becoming an "emancipated minor" in April 74. That action allowed him to get married in May, seize control of DLM from his mother and become financially independent. In short he was "Taking Control". That carries us through to 83 and the "Westernisation" or some better heading/description. I've had to add some more info to teaching but with condensing else where we're still below 2400 words.Momento 04:21, 21 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Momento, do you have a source that states Rawat became an emancipated minor, or did he just apply to become one? If you would, I'd appreciate seeing the source text.  I never heard about him becoming emanicpated, or I've forgotten.  I don't have a problem with "taking control" as a header for the section, btw. I'm just curious about the emancipation part.  Thanks for the compliment; I was a bit nervous making edits.  If no one minds, I'd like to continue making copy edits to firm up any sentences that seem awkward.  Thanks.  Sylviecyn 11:41, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

It's in Cagan's book page 197. "In Denver in April 1974, Maharaji applied to become an emancipated minor, becaue he and Marolyn were now engaged and he knew his mother would not condone his marriage at sixteen (or any other age, considering the American wife he'd chosen). With his emancipation, he could obtain a legal marriage licence without his mother's signature. After spending about forty five minutes with a judge, he was granted his request". I'll change the quote. Momento 13:11, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

I like the name Taking Control, or maybe Taking Charge. Good. AndSylvie,pleasedo.What'shappened?Ican'tdospaces.I'llusecommas.I,write,weird,stuff,sometimes,please,tell,me,when,I,do,or,just,correct,it.Sheesh,I,hope,this,sorts,itself,out,soon.Rumiton 13:50, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

OK, I'm back, with spaces. Would you believe it, a tiny piece of toast got caught under the spacebar? (OK, Jossi, going back to work now.) Rumiton 16:05, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

Momento, the reasons I thought the Teachings section should go in early were:

1. I think that would be the main interest of someone looking him up.

2. I think there is a need to tell the reader more about Knowledge, as it is rightly mentioned in the Lead Section and also in Childhood. Rumiton 16:10, 21 April 2007 (UTC)


 * You're right that people might want his teachings, when this editor's talk space is removed the table of contents will sit in the lede. Meaning people can see "Teachings" and click on it as their first move. I agree Knowledge/Teachings could have more info. I'm really happy with the article now. As they say 'it may no be the article any of us would have written but it is an article we can all live with".Momento 01:49, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

Yes, I think it is pretty close to acceptable. There are a couple of points I think could be expanded or done better, but I can't see a way right now. I do feel the word Knowledge needs to be explained early. Rumiton 12:31, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

I think that's covered by the fact that clicking on the first mention of Knowledge takes you to the Techniques article. Added to Knowledge/Teachings - a bit from Melton/Partridge that bridges the gap between the Sants and the present and talks about the "living master".Momento 20:41, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

Revision review 24-04-07
The lede is generally good. It provides a succinct summary overview. I believe it should briefly touch upon his marriage and family split, and the criticism directed at him. A single sentence would suffice for each issue and bring the lede right up to standard, providing a brief but complete overview.

The first 2/3 of Leaving India is very good. The final two paragraphs are somewhat problematic. The question of divinity should be left to a separate following paragraph. End the event paragraph noting that Abbie was a member of the Chicago group. The question of Godhood should be a complete paragraph of its own. Prem Rawat has on occasion given affirmative and negative answers about his Godhood/divinity. Quotes of both types should be included for balance. Even better would be no direct quotes but rather a statement that he has both affirmed[1] and denied[2] the claim. Quote mining can be dangerous territory and it may be simply best to report and reference. There are other ways the topic can be addressed better. These are simply my suggestions. Do what you think is best.

The remainder of the draft is very good until Teachings. The writing needs to be tightened up and made more consistent. The draft just seems to lose the flow of writing there. I have no particular advice in that regard, except to remove the age disclaimer sentance from the last paragraph, which seems out of place.

All in all, it needs some tightening up in just a few places, but this is a very good draft. Vassyana 15:33, 24 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Altered the lede, created a separate paragraph for "Godhead/Divinty and reduced teachings. I will smooth and tighten later if Rumiton or SylvieCyn don't beat me to it. Thanks again for your excellent advice.Momento 21:04, 24 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Since part of the GA requirement is that the article is stable, I would like to propose a temporary moratorium on editing this article once it replaces the existing article (and we can all take a Wiki break).Momento 21:56, 24 April 2007 (UTC)


 * It seems the some people do not have a clear understanding of "divinity". I take it to be "of or from God", i.e. not "God".Momento 22:55, 24 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Momento: The refs need to be placed alongside the text, and not just at the end of a paragraph. That way readers can check what sources are saying what. Having 9 refs at the end of the paragraph does not work. See WP:CITE ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 01:07, 25 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Apologies. I have altered/reduced some paragraphs in accordance with Vassanya's advice but I have left all references intact in case we want to reinstate the material. One para has 11 refs attached. Will do a tidy up once Vassanya and others have commented.Momento 01:43, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

(Leaving India)
We need to make the point that PR was also responsible for the perception that he was a Saviour and not that just others were to blame.

Hi Vassayana, regarding this edit - 27 April 2007 - http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Prem_Rawat/Bio_proposal&diff=126346446&oldid=126272899) I have removed the phrase that stressed that Rawat 'let others cast him in the role of the Lord' without mentioning his own claims of Divinity. I also added the second part of the Collier quote which Momento omitted and which created unbalance. That is: Addressing several hundred thousand ecstatic Indian devotees, prepared for his message by a four-thousand-year cultural tradition, he declares, 'I am the source of peace in this world . . . surrender the reins of your life unto me and I will give you salvation.' On national television in the United States he says sheepishly, with his hands folded in his lap, 'I am just a humble servant of God.'  I hope you agree with my editorial decision. Momento has threatened on my Talk Page to revert such an edit. I think that the Collier full quote makes both the crucial points that a) Rawat 'let others cast him in the role of the Lord'  and importantly that b) he also was personally responsible for that perception. The latter is the contentious point that was conspicuously missing in many people's opinion. Can you help us settle this once and for all? What do you think? Is it not fair to make both these points quite clear? Is it not undesirable to omit the information that Rawat spoke of himself publicly as 'the source of peace in this world' and as one who could offer 'Salvation'? PatW 09:05, 27 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I have reinstated the words PatW deleted = "for letting others cast him in the role of the Lord". You can't just alter a respected scholar's quote because it contradicts your POV.Momento 09:46, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Rumiton, is your change of "for letting" to "when he let" a grammatical necessity. "For letting" is what Downton actual wrote.Momento 10:13, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

It isn't a direct quote, it's a paraphrase. Downton's clumsy phrase obstructs the flow of our article. IMO. ("There has been far too much of this sort of thing lately." ref. Tony Hancock. "Hancock's Half Hour.") "I think this job is starting to get to me." Ref. me. Rumiton 14:25, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Since Momento wants us to carefully preserve the original meaning of quotes in our paraphrasing, I have added Rawat's significant Peace Bomb Satsang words as Collier uses, to reflect her original meaning. (ie. that Rawat was indeed responsible in part, for the perception of him as a Messianic figure.) So this is my edit:

''Rawat was said to "generally encourage whatever view is held by the people he is with" whilst some of his public declarations such as "I am the source of peace in this world...surrender the reins of your life unto me and I will give you salvation." inspired people to see him in a Messianic role.''

Now if I were to follow Jossi's idea to summarise this, I would say something like:

''Rawat's views about himself were open to interpretation. Whilst he generally encouraged whatever views people held around him, the tone of his speeches inspired many to see him in a Messianic role.'' What do you think?PatW 19:48, 27 April 2007 (UTC)


 * That is exactly what WP:SYN warns us about. Tagged accordingly. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 19:32, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Yes, I agree it's not right yet. Sorry, I'll give it some further thought.PatW 20:07, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

If it isn't right PatW, you should remove it. Since you didn't, I have. Downton is an excellent source on the 72-76 period. He has done far more research than any other scholar I know of. His understanding of Rawat's relationship with his family, his interviews with premies, his access to satsangs and his knowledge of the vibe of the early '70s enables him to make a well balanced and impartial summary of the period in question (that is from Millenium to April 74 when Rawat becomes emancipated). Your summary on the other hand is just unsupported OR and SYN for the sole purpose of pushing your POV. Why do you do it?Momento 22:00, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

PatW you say we need to say that "PR was also responsible for the perception that he was a Saviour and not that just others were to blame". How can a person who happily uses the title "Perfect Master" and "Dispeller of Darkness and Revealer of Light" and "Great King" possibly be accused of not contributing to the perception that he was special. Who can deny it? I certainly don't. And nor does this article. This is what a reader will find out about Prem Rawat from this article -

Rawat claimed to be an Indian Guru when he was eight and said he was ready to bring peace to the world. He let his family kiss his feet as a demonstration of worship. A film of him was called "Lord of the Universe". He said "My Knowledge is God". He claimed that the Guru was greater than God. His mother's talks were full of references to her son's divine nature. He let people cast him in the role of the Lord. His appearance in Indian dress was enough to spark ritual and messianic beliefs and practices. He believes that the Guru or Perfect Master is "an embodiment of God on Earth, a fitting object of worship and veneration". Could he have made more effort to give a perception of specialness? I don't think so. And it's all in black and white in this article.Momento 04:07, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * No moratorium please. I don't have every hour of every day as you do, Momento, to work this article and I've been nursing a back injury this week, so wasn't able to sit for any period of time at my computer.  I can't believe that you now blame the premies' belief that Rawat is the Lord of the Universe on his mother.  That's just incredible.  I got K long after the family split and never even read any of her satsangs.  It was all Rawat's own words that perpetuates that belief.  I don't understand why you and Jossi continuously insist that in a biography of Prem Rawat, that his own words that confirm what he said about his own divinity can't be used.  And I'm not the least bit "confused" of lacking in understanding about what divinity means.  Someone who claims they can practically reveal God to people ain't just some common priest or guru. Also, the sources shouldn't go at the end of the paragraphs, because a reader needs to be informed as to which source is saying what. Rawat has said on more than one occasion that he is Knowledge.  Logically, if he says he reveals God within people, and he is also Knowledge, then what does that make him?  This isn't Hindu mumbo-jumbo, he said these things in English in the late 70s on many occasions.  In the United States, in Florida, and he had a great grasp of the language when he was aged 20 to 22.  Here's Dictionary.com's definition of divinity:

''di·vin·i·ty     /dɪˈvɪnɪti/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[di-vin-i-tee] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation –noun, plural -ties. 1. the quality of being divine; divine nature. 2. deity; godhood. 3. a divine being; God. 4. the Divinity, (sometimes lowercase) the Deity. 5. a being having divine attributes, ranking below God but above humans: minor divinities. 6. the study or science of divine things; theology. 7. godlike character; supreme excellence. 8. Also called divinity fudge. a fluffy white or artificially tinted fudge made usually of sugar, corn syrup, egg whites, and flavoring, often with nuts.

[Origin: 1275–1325; ME divinite < AF < L dīvīnitās. See divine, -ity] Dictionary.com Unabridged (v 1.1) Based on the Random House Unabridged Dictionary, © Random House, Inc. 2006. American Heritage Dictionary - Cite This Source di·vin·i·ty      (dĭ-vĭn'ĭ-tē)  Pronunciation Key n.  pl. di·vin·i·ties

The state or quality of being divine.

Divinity The godhead; God. Used with the. A deity, such as a god or goddess. Godlike character. Theology. A soft white candy, usually containing nuts.

(Download Now or Buy the Book) The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language, Fourth Edition Copyright © 2006 by Houghton Mifflin Company. Published by Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved. WordNet - Cite This Source divinity

noun 1. any supernatural being worshipped as controlling some part of the world or some aspect of life or who is the personification of a force [syn: deity] 2. the quality of being divine; "ancient Egyptians believed in the divinity of the Pharaohs" 3. white creamy fudge made with egg whites 4. the rational and systematic study of religion and its influences and of the nature of religious truth [syn: theology]

WordNet® 3.0, © 2006 by Princeton University. Dictionary dot com Sylviecyn 12:23, 28 April 2007 (UTC)''


 * This is just a straw man argument, Sylvia. There is clear evidence of the mother and elder brother messianic aspirations and being a "holy family". There is clear evidence of some people around the DLM that were doing the same, and a good example is the change of words found by Daniella's research, in which someone changed "Guru Maharaji is here", with "the savior of humanity is here" in Cameron's book. There so many instances than anytime he was asked about who he was, he gave the same answer, trying to dispel these messianic ideas:




 * ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 15:30, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

No one's blaming anyone for some people's belief that Rawat was "The Lord of the Universe". Downton says that " there were social forces encouraging the development of millenarian beliefs within the Mission. They were developed in part by the carryover of millennial thinking from the counterculture; by the psychological trappings of surrender and idealization; by the guru's mother, whose satsang was full of references to his divine nature; and partly by the guru, himself, for letting others cast him in the role of the Lord".

And no one is denying Rawat's divine status. It comes with the territory of being a Guru. Wiki says about the Guru "Based on a long traditional line of philosophical understanding as to the importance of knowledge, the guru is seen in these religions as a sacred conduit, or a way to self-realization". As your dictionary says about "divine" (rather than divinity) - "of or pertaining to a god, devoted to God or a god; religious; sacred: divine worship, proceeding from God or a god: divine laws, godlike; characteristic of or befitting a deity: divine magnanimity, having divine attributes, ranking below God but above humans: minor divinities, godlike character; supreme excellence". Saying a Guru isn't divine is like saying a singer doesn't sing.

Finally this proposal has been in existence since early March. Vassanya criticised the existing article and several editors have worked to create a better one. Vassanya has reviewed this proposal twice and pronounced this draft as "very good" except for two minor areas (a separate paragraph for Godhood/divinity and tighten up Teachings) which have been worked on. There may be some minor adjustments to come but this article is finished. Like you, I do not want to spend hours on this project. I want to help create a "Good Article" to replace the existing "bloated, POV laden, badly written" article. As Wiki suggests, it may not be the perfect article from everyone's viewpoint but it is an article we can all live with. Momento 17:06, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

Well, I've read Vassayana's thoughts on the Divinity issue and I still think that the 'Leaving India' section fails to address his concerns ie.'' Prem Rawat has on occasion given affirmative and negative answers about his Godhood/divinity. Quotes of both types should be included for balance. Even better would be no direct quotes but rather a statement that he has both affirmed[1] and denied[2] the claim.'' What Vassayana thinks of the current wording remains to be seen. I have tried to compose the kind of balanced statement he suggests but it has been instantly removed. Hey I tried. Since Momento is apparently never happy with anyone else attempts to say 'Rawat has both affirmed and denied his Godhood/divinity.' might I suggest he has a go at composing such a statement if only to show some respect for Vassayana's opinion. As it stands the wording of this section simply brings to mind Colliers own choice of words to describe Rawat's denial of his divinity. It is at best still so 'Sheepish'. PatW 22:21, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

Wait a minute...I think I may have solved the problem with this edit. I have replaced the statement that just says that Rawat denied Godhood/divinity in interviews with ''Prem Rawat has made both affirming and denying claims about his Godhood/divine status, in 197..? he claimed that the Guru was greater than God etc...'' Perhaps someone could add the date of the subsequent statement which I don't know. My personal opinion is that thie claim about Guru being greater than God etc. is superfluous in the light of Vassayanas' recommendation to make a simple summary statement. Is this not almost exactly what Vassayana has asked us to do?PatW 22:52, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * That last edit of yours], Pat, violates WP:SYN. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 22:53, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

Are saying that Vassayana's suggestion is to violate WP:SYN? Forgive me but I fail to see why this edit is not almost exactly what Vassayana suggests. Do enlighten me on this please.PatW 22:59, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * No, Pat. Vassyana asked to write a sentence that would include information about these claims and its denials. He did not offer a specific wording, and your wording does not work. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 23:03, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Close to what we need is something along the lines of "Prem Rawat has on occasion given affirmative and negative answers regarding claims of divinity", as per Vassyana's. But I am also not happy with that either. Maybe others can have better ideas. (also note that godhood and divinity mean the same thing) ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 23:05, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

Can I ask that this time editors leave my wording alone until Vassayana has commented? I think that on this occasion there is no good reason to remove it. It is perfectly good english. And actually your version is almost a simple rearrangement of the same words. It's cutting the cake a different way and saying it's better. I think you are just splitting hairs now for no clearly expressed reason. Your last comment I presume affirms that my edit is also extremely 'close to what we need' and that you retract your former statement about my wording violating WP:SYN. I also agree that Godhood and divinity mean the same thing, so to reflect the use of the word God in the next bit I've left it as Godhood. PatW 23:13, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I am not splitting hairs, Pat. The wording you added does not work for me as it violated WP:SYN, that is it makes a statement based on primary sources that has not been published in a reliable source as such. And the alternative wording based on Vassyana suggestion does not work for me either, for the same reason. I will let others make other proposals. Maybe Vassyana himself can craft something we all be happy with? ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 23:32, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * As Jossi said your edit violates WP:SYN. You have assumed that Rawat "made both affirming and denying claims about his Godhood". These are Vassanya's words. As for "In 197..?" etc, the edit is incomplete and meaningless. Please change it back.


 * The previous draft clearly expresses Vassanya's wish to have a paragraph that addresses that 'Rawat has both affirmed and denied his Godhood/divinity". The first sentence states that on one hand he clearly and repeatedly says "I am not God" but on the other hand he say "Guru is greater than God". Many people see those two statements as a great contradiction, as both affirming and denying divinity. Others believe the statement "Guru is greater than God" is a contradiction (or an impossibility) in itself. Christians, Jews and Muslims would no doubt see it as heresy. The argument for Rawat's belief that "Guru being greater than God" is also included, "Because the Guru can reveal God". As far as addressing the contradictory "Godhood/divinity" issue, that sentence does the job in a nutshell. The issue of why some people believed Rawat to be Jesus, the Christian Saviour or the Christian Lord is addressed in the second sentence with Downton's comment about "Millennarian beliefs". "Millennarian beliefs" meaning belief in "A thousand-year period of holiness mentioned in Revelation 20, during which Jesus and his faithful followers are to rule on earth." It is beyond doubt that Rawat clearly and unambiguously stated that he was not Jesus. Despite that, Downton believes that " there were social forces encouraging the development of millennarian beliefs within the Mission. They were developed in part by the carryover of millennial thinking from the counterculture; by the psychological trappings of surrender and idealization; by the guru's mother, whose satsang was full of references to his divine nature; and partly by the guru, himself, for letting others cast him in the role of the Lord". So how do you explain Rawat's opinions of himself and other people's opinion of Rawat? The third sentence wraps it up " Rawat was said to "generally encourage whatever view is held by the people he is with". There is nothing "sheepish" about Rawat saying "I am not God" and there is nothing sheepish about Rawat saying "Guru was greater than God because the Guru can reveal God". They are a revealing and powerful declaration of Rawat's fundemental teachings. His frequent denials of being Jesus, the Christian Saviour begs the question, "Well why did some people say and a believe you were?". Downton answers that question. I think the "Godhood/divinity" paragraph addresses the issue clearly and completely with verifiable scholastic sources. I wouldn't change a word.Momento 23:33, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * So Prem Rawat didn't take any control after all as you assert in the Taking Control, is that what you're saying? Prem Rawat most certainly did take control over his own mission (DLM) and ashrams, and all of the other trappings around him, including dressing in Krishna outfits long after the so-called satsangs of his mother Mataji was out of the picture.  In fact, his own wife sat on those stages with her children while he sat on large thrones. This article is a travesty of the truth.  Sylviecyn 14:17, 29 April 2007 (UTC)

PatW, I think you told a story that illustrates Rawat's attitude. You were standing talking to him somewhere as one human does with another and someone came crawling along the grass to kiss his feet. Rawat just kept on talking to you. Different people have always had different and changing attitudes to Rawat, rather than correct and codify people's beliefs, he just lets people do what ever they're comfortable with.Momento 23:55, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

Yes I'm not denying that. I don't see how that behaviour reflects on his claims of divinity at other times. The fact he made such claims does not suggest that he was forcing people to believe in him as a Divine being. However it seems obvious that such claims encouraged people to adopt that view sometimes - whether they'd had such dormant religious beliefs in a Saviour figure or whether they'd been atheists. Anyway just to explain why the first draft sounds worse: The fact that the previous draft states first only that Rawat denied being divine and then follows it with one unclear quote about his belief that 'Guru is greater than God' plus yet another denial is clearly stressing that he denied it more. Neither does it express an affirmation about his Godhood, it merely alludes to the notion that a Guru (not necessarily him) is somehow greater than God. A lot of people might be interested to know what his definition of God is hearing that. Anyway that quote raises more questions than provides answers. Whatever the case I agree with Vassayana that it is wholly correct, accurate and balanced to report simply that Rawat both affirmed and denied his Godhood. I don't think the average reader would come to any different conclusion however many quotes they researched from the wealth of material available or indeed the quotes now supplied in the existing references. In short his suggestion is fairer and far more straight to the point. Personally I remain unconvinced about this idea of yours that Rawat's comment about "Guru being greater than God" is somehow an important revelation about his teachings. But I left it there so I don't see that there's problem.PatW 00:15, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * I respectfully disagree. There are unambiguous statements about not being "God", and there are abundant quotes in which he makes distinctions between "divinity" and "God". You are mixing apples with oranges and that is the problem with violating WP:SYN. Your very short sentence, followed by one quote (that was selected based on unknown criteria) obfuscates more that clarifies this subject. Momento's version, although not perfect, at least bases the text on the sources provided, without adding a conclusion. Let the reader arrive to their own conclusion. Just note that I am stating my disagreement with your version as well as with Momento's version. Neither of these work for me. (PS: Pat, just a note that godhood is not use capitalized. ) ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 00:30, 29 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Well we know for absolute certain that Rawat always denied being God and never, ever said he was God, so there is no question about his denying being God. And there is no doubt he said he, as a "Guru is greater than God". And as far as I know there is no doubt that he affirmed being generally divine, since a Guru is by definition "a sacred conduit". And there is no doubt he denied being Jesus or the Messiah."  Thus he is both affirming and denying different aspects of "Godhood/divinity". Since the whole article affirms his claim as a Guru and "divine conduit" (title, foot kissing, devotion, showing God) so the last paragraph will naturally need to address those things he denies.Momento 00:35, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * "Affirming and denying different aspects of divinity" is one thing, and "affirming and denying claims about his godhood" is another. The former may work, but the latter is original research. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 00:39, 29 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I have gone back to the previous draft. PatW claim that Rawat "affirmed claims about his godhood" is patently false. I'm happy to work on a compromise version but not one that is completely untrue.Momento 01:13, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * There is no need to revert, Momento. As long as we are discussing this, there is no need to revert each other. I think, call me an optimist, that we are getting close to a compromise version. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 01:18, 29 April 2007 (UTC)

Yes Momento, that was a bit below the belt. I share Jossi's optimism. I really think you guys are just getting tied up over this. Maybe we should just invite Vassayana to cut through all this. After all Jossi invited him to mediate here and you surely have to respect his opinion. What I have inserted is totally and simply what he was suggesting. Anyway it's no big deal..Rawat did claim to be divine. Momento, you've elaborately argued how virtually the entire article proclaims this unashamedly and I agree. Now, when Vassayana just wants us to say this in a few succinct normal words you guys are getting all jumpy. Apparently about nothing. Momento I addressed your comment to me about Rawat accepting people's behaviours on my Talk page as I could see it veering off-topic.PatW 01:29, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Vassyana took us out of a quagmire in the Techniques of K article. Maybe he can help us here again. Or maybe Momento or Pat can come up with a version that we can all accept. I am reluctant to make specific proposals as I have been unable to come up with any brilliant ideas. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 01:32, 29 April 2007 (UTC)


 * An issue for me PatW is that you keep repeating stuff you know, or should know, is untrue. As Jossi told you on April 28, "I did not chose Vassyana as a "mediator". He was the editor that reviewed the GA proposal, and he did that out of his own volition". And yet on April 29 you're still claiming "After all Jossi invited him ". Please desist.Momento 04:34, 29 April 2007 (UTC)


 * To be accurate, I asked editors to do a review, and Vassyana accepted. I never engaged Vassyana before that, although I was aware of his capabilities as a reviewer. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 17:38, 29 April 2007 (UTC)

The last paragraph
Jossi, I didn't revert because I needed to keep your improvements. PatW, if you want to replace the current version, come up with something better, don't waste your creativity on the talk page. Momento 04:22, 29 April 2007 (UTC)

Just so you know why I am happy with the current paragraph.

It fits in with the logical flow of the section which helps readability = "Millennium '73,"→"Lord of the Universe" → Rennie Davis→ Abbie Hoffman→"If this guy is God→ "No. My Knowledge is God"→ Guru is greater than God→millenarian beliefs→divine nature→the Lord→"generally encourage whatever view is held by the people he is with".

Some major points are covered with the minimum of words = (I'm not God) →My Knowledge is God"→ Guru was greater than God.

I don't think Vassayana wants us to encapsulate (Rawat's claim to be divine) in a few succinct normal words. That is already demonstrated previously. He asked us to address that "Prem Rawat has on occasion given affirmative and negative answers about his Godhood/divinity". "Godhood/divinity" is a step up from just being "divine". It relates to - did he or didn't he say he was God? The negative answer is that he denied being God and the affirmative answer was that he said he was "greater than God" (more God than God).

Momento 20:30, 29 April 2007 (UTC)

Housekeepiing: I much prefer to group the references at the end of the paragraph to which they refer. Because the ref numbers are bigger than the text, inserting them in the text makes the line spacing vary which looks untidy. Wiki guidelines say - Place a ref tag at the end of the term, phrase, sentence, or paragraph to which the note refers. Can we agreee to places cites at the "end of the paragraph to which the note refers". Momento 07:34, 30 April 2007 (UTC)

I don't have too much time right now but let me just say that the statement 'Guru is greater than God' should absolutely not be supplied AS IF it were the singular 'affirmative answer about his Godhood/divinity". Besides it simply is not an affirmation about Godhood, it is an affirmation about being something 'greater than God' which as I say, raises more questions than offers any answers. ie. What is greater than God for heavens sake?  This quote is obfuscating the issue inmho. This is a good example of why Vassayana rightly says that " The question of Godhood should be a complete paragraph of its own." ie. a separate paragraph without quotes. Why? Because it would be better to have "no direct quotes but rather a statement that he has both affirmed[1] and denied[2] the claim. Quote mining can be dangerous territory..." (which is apparently your favoured approach).  As I said, I left the quotes that you supplied there, but simply inserted Vassyana's separate paragragh "Prem Rawat has on occasion given affirmative and negative answers about his Godhood/divinity"  (in slightly re-arranged grammar).  I consider that the quotes and impression that Rawat believed he was Divine are amply apparent and supported from the existing article in it's entirety. You yourself have affirmed this view so I think you should understand this point.  I have now reinserted the separate paragraph as per Vassayana's suggestion, but this time have left your subsequent quote scenario unaltered. I would again ask that you don't revert it so that Vassyana can clearly see that we have attempted to heed his advice. If you disapprove then by all means state your reasons clearly here and we can discuss.PatW 08:47, 30 April 2007 (UTC)


 * PatW, Vassanya's sentence (and now yours) suggests that Rawat has expressed contradicting opinion about his "Godhood" (godhood implies the God version of childhood, that is the act of being God). He has not. We have never found a quote of Rawat saying "I'm God" and many saying "I'm not God". Rawat has been consistant, I'm not God, I'm a human being, I am a Guru, my Knowledge is divine. Show me one aspect of god/godhood/divine/divinity that Rawat has given both affirmative and negative answers about. Momento 20:24, 30 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Rumiton, I put the bit about needing a Guru into "teachings" because scholars have mentioned it and it's well sourced. The sources I removed were superfluous to the paragraph and just added unnecessary numbers to the text. The source I included (Downton) was added to support the claim people moved back in the Ashram (Reinserted). What other "cite needed" for that paragraph. Downton uses both "millennial" and "millenarian", "millenarian" seems to have more connect with prophecy. Momento 20:35, 30 April 2007 (UTC)

Momento, frankly I'm not sure it would be the best use of my time to go off finding more quotes to split hairs over with you. You have admited that this whole article is full of confirmations that Prem Rawat considered himself divine. There are plenty of secondary quotes supporting this fact. Also Vassayana is well aware that we could legitimately resort to referring to primary source quotes if you push hard enough for evidence (in your unwelcome recalcitrance.) We have discussed this. You have on numerous occasions sought to nit-pick on exactly what you think Rawat meant by divine, as if the word itself needed his or your 'special' definition. This article should not be about yours or his re-invention of the English language and your attempt to argue over this is surely futile and a waste of our time. It is an argument that could go on for ever and I don't think Vassyana or anyone in their right mind wants to go there. Now you are quibbling about the meaning of the word 'Godhead' which Jossi and I both agree means 'divine'. You argue now that Rawat never said he was divine, but then I've heard you argue why he actually meant 'we all have divinity in us' and that's mysteriously ok. So I might as well argue back we are all God in our own way and so that's what I think Rawat meant. In short you sound chronically unable to accept any reasonable, linguistically correct generalisation about this because you are apparently worried that people will interpret english words in a way you'd rather they didn't. Please don't  drag this discussion into an impossible stand off about new-age age semantics. Finally, it must have occurred to you that, at this stage of the game, it is Vassayana whom you need to impress with your arguments not me. I suspect that if you get your way in this matter your choice of words will simply be judged as dishonest again.PatW 23:32, 30 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Do you really believe that editors here are arguing that there is no aspects of divinity involved? The article is very clear in presenting what secondary sources say about the subject in very unambiguous terms. There is no need to keep pushing a certain point of view (from either side), when there is so much material on the subject. See Downton, Melton, der Lans, Kranemorg, Hunt, Barret, Goring, Lippy and all others. They all refer to aspects of divinity. We can terminate this endless discussion here and now, by just simply agreeing to avoid OR, and stick to what scholars have said about the subject. As per Wikipedia policy, we report what secondary, notable sources say about a subject and in the presence of such abundance of sources, we do not need to even contemplate for a second to do our own analysis. We can keep such analysis for our blogs, Myspace or any other fora. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 23:41, 30 April 2007 (UTC)

Am I the only one who appreciated the simple good sense of what Vassyana says? Jossi, please don't accuse me of trying to push a POV. That is not true. What I am trying to do is to insert an almost uniquely balanced view. Namely that Rawat not only made claims about being Divine but also denied it eg. "I am not God". As Vassayana confirms, it is NOT out of place, as you suggest, to make summary statements to avoid having to quibble endlessly over quotes. At least that is my understanding. The 'analysis' that Vassyana suggested (if that's what you want to call it) was perfectly reasonable and supported by the already existing sources. Why don't you and Momento stop avoiding the matter and compose your own single sentences that you think summarise what Vassyana and I are driving at? Why haven't you? Is it because you can't do any better than we have? Go on, give it a try. I'm all ears and quite open-minded for the wording to be bettered. Maybe put in your 'aspects of divinity' just so as the readers know exactly what Rawat meant.PatW 00:01, 1 May 2007 (UTC)

How about: '' Prem Rawat has made both affirming and denying claims about the degrees of his not ever-so, but quite, well...extremely...er..sometimes...Divine aspects and Godliness.. um...God-like aspects...or not as the case may be.''PatW 00:17, 1 May 2007 (UTC)

Vassyana. Momento keeps reverting my edit as per your suggestion. Your advice would be welcome
I have requested Momento leave the edit for Vassyana's attention and discussion, but he will not do so. Here is the simple line I have inserted and which Momento has reverted several times, ignoring my polite requests for him not to:  Prem Rawat has made both affirming and denying claims about his Godhood.PatW 00:01, 1 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Be careful PatW. I reverted your edit after 24 hours because it was incomplete and you wouldn't fix it. You replaced it with another unsourced version and it was Rumiton and not me who reverted that edit. I don't accept your latest version Jossi. Someone has to show me a scholars quote that says that Rawat has given both affirmative and negative answers about anything.Momento 00:26, 1 May 2007 (UTC)


 * The OR contained in the phrase - "Prem Rawat has made both affirming and denying claims" will never be acceptable without a verifiable source. I've put in another version of the first sentence that does have a verifiable source. This is probably more in the area of illustrating the supposed contradiction Vassanya was eluding to. (I'm finding a more detailed one).Momento 00:36, 1 May 2007 (UTC)

I added a proposed wording attempting to merge Pat and Momento's verions, which I am not 100% happy with as it may be too close to OR for comfort. Here is the diff. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 01:17, 1 May 2007 (UTC)


 * It is OR without sources. I have replaced it with this sourced paraphrase - While he denied being the Messiah in interviews, pre-existing millennial beliefs were fostered partly by his mother, whose talks were full of references to her son's divine nature, and partly by Rawat himself, when he let others cast him in the role of the Lord. Rawat was said to "generally encourage whatever view is held by the people he is with". The first phrase now more accurately relates to the "millennial beliefs".Momento 02:07, 1 May 2007 (UTC)

Rumiton, what are your objections to noting in "Teachings" that Rawat says you need a Guru.Momento 07:09, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

Momento, I can't find in history the item you refer to. Would you mind quoting it here? Rumiton 11:13, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

Pat, if you want to put in Prem Rawat has made both affirming and denying claims about his Godhood, which Godhood are you referring to? The one that he has, or the one he doesn't have, or the one we all share, or the one that doesn't exist? To me, this statement doesn't make any sense, and to be exquisitely frank, at this point I don't give a flying freak if a hundred scholars said it that way. It isn't easy describing Prem Rawat or the role he has played in many lives in a way that will be intelligible to someone never before involved, and which does justice to him and to the experience he shows, but that is the sincere effort here. We all need to put our thinking caps on and find a way not to waste another couple of good years. Rumiton 11:53, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

Ruminton, I think that 'divinity' and 'Godhood' (which were actually Vassayana's choice of words) are acceptable generalisations under the circumstances. To anwer your question, I am not 'referring to' any personal interpretation of the meaning of the words at all, and neither would any reader since we are not suggesting any specific details about 'aspects of Divinity'etc. which I see as a dangerous road to go down. It is clearly a generalisation about Rawat's numerous claims to be Divine, which is undeniable but not particularly clear in terms of what Rawat meant; and also his denials about being God, which (considering that statement about being 'greater than God') is also still totally unclear. None of the secondary quotes are particularly clear except that reading them gives the clear impression that Rawat was ambiguous about his divinity. Period. I personally don't give flying freak (as you put it!) about Momento's or anyones interpretation of what Rawat meant or means these day. As we've all discussed ad nauseam that is very, very open to personal interpretation- notwithstanding that people (like you) are also concerned about your interpretation in the light of your personal 'inner experience'. So it cannot be argued conclusively what Rawat actually claims or denies. I still maintain that the sentence Prem Rawat has made both affirming and denying claims about his Godhood (or divinity) is a very neutral sounding general comment which broadly cuts across all the endless blather by us and which certainly would 'be intelligible to someone never before involved', and which amply  does justice to Rawat. I'm frankly perplexed as to why supporters are so jumpy about it. Actually it just nicely preserves Rawat's continuing ambiguity. Quotes like the full Collier one simply illustrate this fact. PatW 16:05, 2 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Rumiton, I added the bit in bold - "Like the Sants, Rawat's main claim is that God lives in the heart of every human being, and can be experienced through the techniques of Knowledge with the help of a Guru or master". Using this reference by Stephen J. Hunt Alternative Religions: A Sociological Introduction (2003), pp.116-7, Ashgate Publishing, Ltd. ISBN 0-7546-3410-8 -The process of reaching the true self within can only be achieved by the individual, but with the guidance and help of a teacher.--Momento 19:24, 2 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Momento, did I delete that? I wonder about this software when complex things are being undertaken. Anyway, no problem here, please restore. Rumiton 11:58, 3 May 2007 (UTC)


 * PatW "Guru is greater (more important) than God because Guru reveals God". Rawat used to give this analogy. You're alone dying of thirst. Who saves you. The water which is necessary for every life on this planet or the person who shows you how to dig a hole and find it. It's the person, the water was there but you couldn't reach it. And PatW the sentence "Prem Rawat has made both affirming and denying claims about his Godhood (or divinity) is not neutral, it suggests contradiction. Rawat was consistant and stated clearly- I am not God, I am not the Christian Messiah, I am a Guru/Perfect Master (who are seen as divine), I am greater than God, we are all divine (to or from God). There are several contradictions here IF you want to interpret Rawat's comments through a Christian filter. If you accept the Indian basis for his teachings, there are no contradictions. No scholar suggests Rawat was "contradictory. To paraphrase the entire topic - Rawat's Hindu based theology caused confusion amongst some westerners who tried to interpret his ideas according to Christian theology." Momento 19:24, 2 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Jossi, your new sentence suggesting Rawat denied a "divine nature in interviews and talks" is incorrect. He has one and so do we. A large part of Rawat's teachings are concerned with redicovering our "divine nature".Momento 06:42, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

Last paragraph
The problem I see is that we are taking Vassanya's earlier comment that Rawat "affirmed and denied" literally. So we look for that contradiction in Rawat's words that aren't there. But there is a contradiction between Christian and Hindu versions of the Divine Teacher ( example - denies being Jesus-the Divine Teacher but affirms being Perfect Master - the Divine Teacher). Scholars understand the difference in Hindu and Christian theology but this point was lost on many of Rawat's followers. Downton's research and book is the most detailed on the period in question - arrival in the West to getting married. He doesn't suggest Rawat contradicted himself. But he does describe the "contradiction", the adoption of pre-existing "millennial beliefs" into DLM based upon Rawat's teachings and behaviour when Rawat has already said he is not the Messiah. The contradiction occurs when Rawat's early Hindu based teachings are interpreted through Christian theology. Hindu and Christians have different understandings of God, (including embodiments, manifestations and incarnations of God), Gurus or people who claim or can show you God, past Masters etc. The contradiuction is Rawat saying he was not Jesus and many devotees claiming he was; not necessarily that Rawat was the historical Jesus but that Rawat was the new Jesus, the old Jesus returned. That contradiction of what Rawat said about himself and what his devotees said is noted by several scholars and media and should be addressed in the article. The article already contains an accurate and representative progression of Rawat's teachings and behaviour, it is just missing Downton's observation.

Chronologically it has Rawat declaring himself to be a Guru and Perfect Master ( defined as an embodiment of God on Earth, a fitting object of worship and veneration"). It has his family kissing his feet, it has Hoffman talking about Rawat being God and Rawat's denial, (the missing paragraph goes here), it has Rawat going more secular, it has his appearance in Indian dress and the shift from secular tendencies towards ritual and messianic beliefs. And it has his final abandonement of Indian methods and practices. The missing paragraph is all that's needed. And that is Downton's observation that between coming to the west and 1974 -  "pre-existing millennial beliefs were fostered "partly by Rawat himself, when he let others cast him in the role of Lord". I'm going to go back to my original paraphrase from Downton.Momento 20:48, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

I'm going to check this article for sources etc but I believe it is very good. I propose changing over in a few days.Momento 21:21, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

Victim of our own success. Because we have so many references for this article and the ref numbers are bigger than the text, inserting them in the text makes the line spacing vary which looks untidy. Wiki guidelines say - Place a ref tag at the end of the term, phrase, sentence, or paragraph to which the note refers. Can we agreee to places cites at the "end of the paragraph to which the note refers". It also allows the reader to read the paragraph unencumbed and then confirm all the references (if necessary) at once, since all references are visible once the first one is slected. It will make for a much better looking article.--Momento 20:43, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

I agree they clutter up the place, and your suggestion would make for a better read. Maybe it would be better to combine all references for one paragraph in one number, and underline or bold the individual topics. Rumiton 14:03, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
 * That does not work. We need, if we want the article to remain stable and unchallenged, have the refs placed after the text they support. That is the way it is done in Wikipedia, to comply with WP:V. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 15:33, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I believe in cases where the references support the paragraph (rather than individual claims), it is appropriate to footnote only at the end of the paragraph. Otherwise, I would agree with Jossi that the individual claim supported should receive the footnote. If there are too many references to cleanly cite, it would be perfectly fine to choose a limited number of the sources for footnotes. The remaining references could be listed under a "further reading" section. This allows the footnotes to be reduced, while not excluding potential sources of information for readers and researchers. Vassyana 21:04, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

I think you've done it again, Vassyana! I left a message on your talk page. Rumiton 12:19, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

It's time

 * I think this article is ready to replace the exisiting article. There are a few Cagan refs that need more info but otherwise, it's all there.Momento 19:53, 6 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I also think so. It's certainly way better than what is there currently. Rumiton 08:17, 7 May 2007 (UTC) What about Vassyana's suggestion re putting some of our overcrowded reference section into Further Reading? Rumiton 10:47, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

The second par. of Taking Control doesn't reflect the source. Who said "secular, non-Indian DLM?" Who states that Rawat encouraged premies to move out of ashrams after his marriage in 1974 (which is implied in the prose? Where does the reduction in numbers of DLM staff derive from?  This is a great example of prose-writing misinterpreting the source material.  Thanks.  Sylviecyn 13:10, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
 * You could have stopped before the last sentence. If you find issues such as these, bring them up and these will be fixed by those that care about having a great article. Thanks. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk)


 * I have inserted appropriate references from Downton covering 74 to 76. Thanks for pointing it out. Now will SylvieCyn agree it is a great example of prose writing accurately paraphrasing source material.Momento 20:11, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

Joassi. how do we make the swap. Is it just cut and paste?Momento 21:28, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

I think "The event was covered satirically in the award-winning documentary" is better than ":The event was covered satirically in a parody ".Momento 19:27, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

Yes, parody and satire are much the same thing. Rumiton 02:41, 9 May 2007 (UTC)

Jossi, I think it's time to make the swap. I'm not sure how to do it, could you please?--Momento 19:27, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
 * There are still some issues standing, no? Have you made the necessary corrections as per above comments? We also need to complete the Cagan's book citations. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 19:53, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

Yes. I referenced the paragraph and I have found pages in Cagan. Let's do the swap. It's so much better than the current article. It won't be without its critics. I suspect editors will appear out of the woodwork who hate the idea of a Rawat artcicle going for GA status and will try to muck it up but we shouldn't let that scare us.Momento 22:16, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

I'm going make the swap tomorrow. I'll just cut and paste the two articles and leave the "Prem Rawat talk" page attached.Momento 06:15, 9 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Feels like time to me. Rumiton 09:47, 9 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I think that this proposal is not accurate in citations and presenting the work of Hummel, Melton, Kranenborg and omits Derks Van der Lans. I have repeatedly stated this in precise constructive concrete ways at talk:Prem Rawat, but nothing is done with my suggestions and comments. In contrast, the old version is already accurate in this respect. As a result of this dismissive uncollaborative attitude of Momento towards my comments, I have no intention to spend the effort and time to give exhaustive constructive criticisms of the many flaws of this version. I do however see that this version has some advantages when compared to the old version, such as its better structure and its conciseness. Due to all of this I think it is a waste of time to try to improve this version and I have started another proposal Talk:Prem_Rawat/Bio_proposal nr2 that tries to combine the good aspects of the old version and this version. For the time being I will focus there on improving the structure of the old version, not so much on shortening the old version. Andries 11:46, 13 May 2007 (UTC)

Finishing touches
I notice that the Martin Luther page doesn't use a string of ref numbers the way we have been doing, just one. If no one dissaproves, I shall combine them in the same way tomorrow. Rumiton 13:58, 1 June 2007 (UTC)


 * A few changes have been made to the current article that I think are good. For instance, noting that Rawat had worn the Krishna outfit in 75. Otherwise it may look like he did this whole new thing. Also the 707 sentence, I think the current article reads better.Momento 21:54, 1 June 2007 (UTC)


 * All right, I'll make sure nothing gets left out. Can you give me specifics where you feel the Bio Prop needs improvement in scanning? Rumiton 08:10, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

I just looked over both articles and can find no difference in treatment of 707. Then again, it is late. Am I missing something? Don't know where the 1975 Krishna outfit ref went to. It was there. I have put it back. There is one more reference in the current article, but it is a blank reference which I removed for the Bio Proposal. Rumiton 15:36, 2 June 2007 (UTC)


 * "The first project was the customization of a Boeing 707 for his work. During 1981, Rawat flew the 707 to South America, Europe, India, Nepal, Australia, New Zealand and Malaysia. He visited forty different cities and spoke on 120 occasions". I took out the US bit because I think it's a given and the international trips are more significant. I think the teachings section could have more info but I'm happy to take a break from editing.Momento 19:19, 2 June 2007 (UTC)


 * There was a lot of discussion re reference numbers. The consensus was that because we have so many sources and there has been so much dispute that every word/sentence/para needed cites.Momento 19:23, 2 June 2007 (UTC)


 * OK, I'm happy about all that, though I still feel one reference number should be enough. So I'll make those changes and install the Bio Prop as the current article? We can work on the readability. I would like to start now on the issues that still really divide us, towards a stable article. Rumiton 02:53, 3 June 2007 (UTC)


 * The issue is that often sentences contain several disprate facts, like the TPRF sentence and this article has a higher than normal need for verifiable sources. As for the issues the divide us, I agree that the teachings section could do with more of how Rawat describes his teachings. I would n't swap articles until everyone is happy with this one.Momento 09:51, 3 June 2007 (UTC)


 * I don't think ^ Stephen A. Kent From Slogans To Mantras. "I found his poorly delivered message to be banal." deserves to be in this article, He is talking about his experience from attending one night and hearing Rawat talk. It's not very scholarly.Momento 17:59, 4 June 2007 (UTC)

I agree with you. Rumiton 02:58, 5 June 2007 (UTC)

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Prem Rawat, also known as Maharaji (formerly Guru Maharaj Ji) has been a speaker and teacher on the subject of "inner peace" since the age of eight, as well as offering instruction of four meditation techniques he calls Knowledge.[3][4]

has been a speaker and teacher on the subject of "inner peace" - '''How has he taught on the subject of “inner peace” ? – this requires evidence.'''

In 1971 Rawat traveled from India to speak in London and Los Angeles and was the subject of substantial media attention. [5] He returned to the West in 1972 with his mother and elder brother, and formed the Divine Light Mission to assist in spreading his message. Tens of thousands of followers were attracted, largely from the hippie culture, and dozens of Indian style ashrams were established. Rawat was criticised by Christian religious scholars on the basis of his youth, his behaviour and his teachings.[6][7][8]

He returned to the West in 1972 with his mother and elder brother, and formed the Divine Light Mission to assist in spreading his message. – '''How did Rawat form DLM ? he was not legally of age in either Britain or the US and citizenship requirements would anyway have meant that UK and US citizens respectively would have to have been signatories of any legal infrastructure to make the organisations work. Introducing the notion of a ‘message’ requires that the ‘message’ be defined.'''

Rawat's desire to manifest his own vision brought him into conflict with his mother and family, and his marriage to an American follower in 1974 caused a permanent split.[9][10] From this point Rawat and his teachings became more Western, and in the early 1980s he abandoned the title and trappings of a guru, closed the ashrams and changed his style to appeal to a Western audience. The Prem Rawat Foundation was established in 2001 to promote his message which is currently distributed in eighty-eight countries on video, print, and television, as well as to spearhead humanitarian efforts. [11][12]

In April 1974 Rawat, now aged sixteen, became an emancipated minor, and in May married 25 year old Marolyn Johnson, one of his American students. [29] The marriage to a non-Indian finally severed Rawat's relationship with his mother, who disowned him and returned to India with his two elder brothers. There she gained legal control of DLM India and appointed the eldest brother, Satpal, as leader. Rawat took control of the Western DLM and declared himself its sole source of spiritual authority. Most of the mahatmas in the West either returned to India or were fired.[30][31][32]

There she gained legal control of DLM India. Divine Light Mission was registered as an Association – no individual could gain legal control.

After the split with his mother, Rawat and non-Indian DLM became more Western and secular.[33] Rawat encouraged students to leave the ashram and discard Indian terminology and customs.[34] Staff at DLM's Denver HQ were reduced from 250 to 80, and Rawat became financially independent through the contributions of his Western devotees which allowed him to follow the lifestyle of an American millionaire, support his wife and children, and finance the world travel of staff.[35][36]

After the split with his mother, Rawat and non-Indian DLM became more Western and secular – a wholly erroneous misstatement of what Downton actually says.

In 1980, Rawat's activities included the development of an executive jet refurbishing facility known as DECA. The first project was the customization of a Boeing 707 for his work. During 1981, Rawat flew the 707 to South America, Europe, India, Nepal, Australia, New Zealand and Malaysia. He visited forty different cities and spoke on 120 occasions. DECA was later sold to Aircraft Modular Products (AMP), which in turn was sold in 1998 to B/E Aerospace for US$118 million.[42][43]

In 1980, Rawat's activities included the development of an executive jet refurbishing facility known as DECA. '''How was Rawat active in the ‘development’ ? Why known as DECA ? Either it was a business in which case the business name applies or an explanation of why it was ‘known as’ is required. The whole construction of this paragraph is misleading it creates the impression that the DECA business was a planned development from 707 onwards – there is no evidence that this took place and if Michael Dettmers is not to be quoted then making up the notion that a business plan existed after the event certainly is not acceptable.'''

Rawat returned to India in October 1980 after an absence of five years, and on newly acquired land in Delhi spoke to over 38,000 people. He also revisited South America, going to Mexico for the first time. He held large, multi-day events for his students in Colombia (Cartagena), Miami, Rome, London, New Delhi and Kansas City, and also spoke at programs in Cancun, Lima, Sao Paulo and Leicester (UK).[44]

He held large, multi-day events for his students. '''Using the term students for dates prior to the mid 1990s is anachronistic. Further the construction “he held” is nonsensical – the holding of events was an organisational function Rawat certainly did not do the ‘holding’.'''

Prem Rawat speaking to the public at the Royal Albert Hall, London, October 12, 1981In the early 1980s, Rawat moved to disband the Divine Light Mission. Renouncing the trappings of Indian culture and religion, he regularly addressed audiences in places as culturally diverse as India, Japan, Taiwan, the Ivory Coast, Slovenia, Mauritius and Venezuela, as well as North America, Europe and the South Pacific.[45]

In the early 1980s, Rawat moved to disband the Divine Light Mission. How could Rawat disband legally constituted organisations ? In 1983 the downsized Divine Light Mission changed its name to Elan Vital, and Rawat closed the last western ashrams, marking the end of Rawat's use of Indian methods for western objectives.[46]

In 1983 the downsized Divine Light Mission changed its name to Elan Vital, and Rawat closed the last western ashrams.. '''How could Rawat close the ashrams ? – he did not own them, or have any legal control of the status of the ashram residents.'''

Rawat continued to tour internationally throughout the 1980s and 1990s, mostly piloting the executive jets leased for the purpose himself. He held events in over 40 countries, and in 1990 spoke at over 50 public events across the world. In December 1998, Rawat spoke via a live, interactive global satellite broadcast from Pasadena, California to 86,600 participants at 173 locations in 50 countries. 1999 saw the commencement of regular satellite broadcasts to North American cities, with similar initiatives started in other countries soon after.[49][50]

Rawat continued to tour internationally throughout the 1980s and 1990s, mostly piloting the executive jets leased for the purpose himself. '''This construction is semantically loaded – the notion of purpose can not be tied to the use of privates jets. The mode of travel is a separate issue from the fact of the travel as other modes were equally feasible. Also not all the jets were leased which requires explanation of how they were acquired - Jets Acquisition Committee etc'''

June 30, 2003. Prem Rawat speaking at the University of Salamanca's first "Conference on Peace".Between 1965 and July 2005 Rawat spoke at 2,280 events around the world. Between January 2004 and June 2005, he delivered 117 addresses in Asia, Europe, and North America. With a more culturally neutral approach, Rawat now concentrates on what he calls a "universal message of peace" and speaks of "self-fulfillment." His message is currently distributed in eighty-eight countries, on video and in print, and is broadcast on TV channels such as Canal Infinito in South America, Channel 31 in Australia, Kabel BW in Germany and Dish Network in the U.S.A.[51][52][53]

With a more culturally neutral approach, Rawat now concentrates on what he calls a "universal message of peace" and speaks of "self-fulfillment." Culturally neutral requires definition.

In 2001, The Prem Rawat Foundation was founded as a Public Charitable Organization, largely for the production and distribution of audiovisual and other materials promoting Rawat's message. It also funds international humanitarian efforts providing water, food and medical relief to war-torn and impoverished areas. In 2007, after an accountability evaluation by the Better Business Bureau, the Foundation became a recommended charity of the Wise Giving Alliance. Rotary International describes TPRF as being established "to improve the quality of life for the disadvantaged."[54][55] [56][57][58][59]

''In 2007, after an accountability evaluation by the Better Business Bureau, the Foundation became a recommended charity of the Wise Giving Alliance. Rotary International describes TPRF as being established "to improve the quality of life for the disadvantaged." 'The BBS evaluation is hardly noteworthy – any organisation not meeting its criteria would be notably dubious. And Rotary has no established capacity to afford notable judgements outside of its own activities.'''

After the split with his family, Rawat declared himself the sole spiritual authority in the Mission,[73] removed many of the Hindu beliefs and Indian trappings, and focused his teachings more on the experience of Knowledge.[74][75]In the early 80s he closed the ashrams, relinquished the remaining Hindu traditions, dropped the title "Guru" and spoke to audiences as Maharaji, a teacher. His work continued to be supported by a new, minimal organization, Elan Vital.

His work continued to be supported by a new, minimal organization, Elan Vital. Wrong EV was just DLM renamed.

Practitioners describe Knowledge as internal and highly individual, without social structure, liturgy or articles of faith, and say that Rawat teaches no beliefs or ethical practices.[76][77] Rawat advises students that for maximum benefit the techniques should be practised daily for at least one hour.[78][79][80].

Practitioners describe Knowledge as internal and highly individual, without social structure, liturgy or articles of faith, and say that Rawat teaches no beliefs or ethical practices. '''What are the limits on quoting practitioners of the techniques ? Surely the view of those who no longer practice, or who practice without reference to Rawat is also of value ?'''

In 2005, a process of self-paced preparation for receiving Knowledge was introduced by Rawat. Known as The Keys, the package consists of five videos which prepare the student for learning and practising the techniques of Knowledge. Key Six is the "Knowledge Session," a multimedia presentation available in fifty languages. Though a small fee is requested to cover postage and packing, the techniques are taught without charge. [81]

''Though a small fee is requested to cover postage and packing, the techniques are taught without charge. [81]'' Small is a relative term – a figure should be given or simply “a fee is requested”

On thinking about it, I agree. I think changing this lies within my mandate for grammatical and other small changes. Done. Rumiton 11:05, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

A U.S. citizen since 1977,[82]Rawat lives with his wife in Malibu, California. They have four grown children. He holds an Airline Transport Pilot License and has type ratings for a number of fixed-wing aircraft and helicopters.[83] His résumé lists skills in computer graphics, computer-aided design and the development of aviation software. He is listed as co-inventor on a U.S. patent for a world-time aeronautic watch.[84] He reports that he supports himself and his family as a private investor, and that he has contributed to the success of several startup companies in various industries, including software.[85]

He reports that he supports himself and his family as a private investor, and that he has contributed to the success of several startup companies in various industries, including software.[85] The lack of any named business is notable – and should be identified as such. --Nik Wright2 12:57, 5 June 2007 (UTC)

NikW
NikW asks many questions. I've answered the first one as an example. NikW asks "How has Rawat taught about innner peace". Well here it all is, available through the article. I haven't the time to answer your many questions NikW, I suggest you take them to someone's talk page.


 * Stephen J. Hunt in Alternative Religions: A Sociological Introduction writes, "When his father died in 1966, the Guru Maharaji announced himself as the new master and started his own teaching". And later, "Maharaji transformed his initial teachings in order to appeal to a Western context". Barret in The New Believers: A Survey of Sects, Cults and Alternative Religions writes that the aurthority of the Master "comes from the nature of the teaching and its benefit to the individual."
 * So Rawat is teaching about something. But what? Well, according to the article Hadden says  it's "meditation techniques". He writes in Religions of the World that "The meditation techniques the Maharaji teaches today are the same he learned from his father, Hans Ji Maharaj, who, in turn, learned them from his spiritual teacher [Sarupanand], 'Knowledge', claims Maharaji, 'is a way to be able to take all your senses that have been going outside all your life, turn them around and put them inside to feel and to actually experience you... ". Stephen J. Hunt in Alternative Religions: A Sociological Introduction writes that "The process of reaching the true self within can only be achieved by the individual, but with the guidance and help of a teacher.
 * So we have Rawat teaching and teaching techniques but is it about "peace", Well, Chryssides in the Historical Dictionary of New Religious Movements writes "This Knowledge was self-understanding, yielding calmness, peace, and contentment, since the innermost self is identical with the divine. Knowledge is attained through initiation, which provides four techniques that allow the practitioner to go within...and emphasizing that the Knowledge is universal, non Indian, in nature." And Hunt writes "The major focus of Maharaji is on stillness, peace, and contentment within the individual, and his 'Knowledge' consists of the techniques to obtain them..
 * So there we have it NikW, in black and white, Rawat is teaching about inner peace. I suppose I could add "by meeting groups of people around the world" but surely I don't have to be that obviousMomento 14:50, 5 June 2007 (UTC)

The above secondary sources may address the questions “What does Prem Rawat teach ? and What has Prem Rawat taught ? However they do not address the question that follows from the article text: Prem Rawat, also known as Maharaji (formerly Guru Maharaj Ji) has been a speaker and teacher on the subject of "inner peace" since the age of eight, as well as offering instruction of four meditation techniques he calls Knowledge.[3][4]

The question being - How has he taught on the subject of “inner peace” ? The quoted references say nothing about the text as it is constructed. If the text read “Prem Rawat has been a teacher of techniques to obtain inner peace” then the quoted references would be relevant – and open to challenge, replacement and/or augmentation by alternatives or additions.

--Nik Wright2 11:37, 9 June 2007 (UTC)


 * We are describing what secondary published sources say about this subject. You will need to read the sources provided. In Wikipedia that is what we do: report on what secondary sources say, and that is what we have done. I would suggest you take some time and read our content policies and guidelines, in particular WP:V and WP:RS in this regard. This applies to many of what you call your challenges, namely: Formation of the DLM, conflict with family, regaining control of DLM in India by his mother, moving away for Indian trappings, and DECA, disbanding of DLM, closing the ashrams, BBS, Rotary, and others. All these are supported by multiple scholarly sources. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 15:49, 5 June 2007 (UTC)


 * NikW, I don't have hours to spend in re-covering all your points either, but I would like to respond to your "challenge" on the Wise Giving Alliance, as you don't appear to know anything about the subject. Accreditation societies defend their reputations fiercely, granting no organisation approval without the most stringent tests. This is not some Mickey Mouse rubber stamp, the Better Business Bureau's methodologies are the most sophisticated in the world. Here are the 44 pages of items they examine before giving "Approved Charity" accreditation. BBB and Wise Giving.And please bear in mind that many of the bold sub-headings (director, meeting, compliance etc) represent a whole subject, with its own definition and rules, found elsewhere in the document or in QA documents. Approval is hard to get, there are no short cuts, and you can't make anything up.


 * As for your rather disparaging Rotary remarks, the organisation has 1.2 million members and has been working in conjunction with other charities for over 100 years. They are probably the most respected volunteer organisation in the world and a very "reliable source" of opinion and comment. Rumiton 05:00, 6 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Rumiton, Hoist by your own petard I think – "as you don't appear to know anything about the subject”. If I don’t know what is relevant, why should any other reader ?

The rhetorical problem arises because there is no context – the state of qualifying is given but no material on whether this is or not, significant. The reality is that the vast majority of the larger Form990 Non Profits meet the BBB criteria – it simply is not a ‘notable' qualification. The context problem is even greater for the Rotary reference because there are not even established criteria to reference. Anyway quite apart from the rhetorical problem, the whole paragraph is extraneous because Rawat has no legal standing with TPRF and has no control over whether TPRF is BBB compliant, as such it should be deleted from the Rawat biography.

To diverge OT briefly – the BBB is open to criticism for being too mechanistic and lacking dynamic testing. For a different approach you might look at http://www.charity-commission.gov.uk/investigations/sorp/

--Nik Wright2 12:07, 9 June 2007 (UTC)


 * NikW, I think the kind of statements you are making here are ones that could take many hours work to answer properly. Is it worth it, I ask myself? Probably not, we have been through this stuff so many times. To go into this topic (BBB etc) in the depth you are suggesting is way beyond the scope of an encyclopedia page. We have already been denied Good Article status after attempting to cover issues like this in too much detail. If a reader has a strong interest the links are there for them to find out more. You may be correct that many of the "larger" non profit organisations in the States meet the BBB criteria (there are other litigational and legislative reasons why they would have a lot of this stuff already in place) but that makes a significant point. TPRF has only been established a short time and has risen to the ranks of the big players. That is "notable" in itself. And I disagree that it is not pertinent to a bio on Prem Rawat. The organisation was named for him and was set up largely to produce and disseminate items that support his work. It is connected with him, even if he does not control it. If the GA sysops tell us we are still too big, then we might look at getting rid of this. Until then it is of interest.


 * Regarding the English approach, yes, that is interesting to me personally. I worked on secondment to Lloyds Accreditation Society in international shipping for a couple of years, and am aware of the different philosophies. But TPRF is not an English organisation. I repeat that in US charity accreditation, BBB comes up tops. Thanks for your interest in this article. Please give us your suggestions for improvement, within the GA guidelines. Rumiton 13:35, 9 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Another general point I think needs addressing is your stated desire to create statements that are "...open to challenge, replacement and/or augmentation by alternatives or additions." This is not what Wikipedia values, and not what we are working towards. The situation you describe is pretty much a time-wasting nightmare for all concerned, otherwise known as edit warring. It leads to articles being locked up and warring editors banned. We have been there; it consumes your life. It is not acceptable to us, nor to Wikipedia (and this is their site.) We are trying to achieve an article that is concise and stable, i.e. worded in such a way that most people can accept it, though it is probably not exactly what they would have wanted. We feel we have made great progress lately, but there is a way to go. Please help us if you feel to. Rumiton 15:13, 9 June 2007 (UTC)

Amendments for Semantic Neutrality
Current text - as of 16.06.07 in plain - amendments in italics

Prem Rawat, also known as Maharaji (formerly Guru Maharaj Ji) has been a speaker and teacher on the subject of "inner peace" since the age of eight, as well as offering instruction of four meditation techniques he calls Knowledge.[3][4]

Prem Rawat, also known as Maharaji (formerly Guru Maharaj Ji) has spoken on the subject of "inner peace" since the age of eight and has offered instruction in the four meditation techniques he calls Knowledge.[3][4]

In 1971 Rawat traveled out of India to speak in London and Los Angeles, and was the subject of substantial media attention.[5] He returned to the West in 1972 with his mother and elder brother, and Divine Light Mission was established to assist in spreading his message. Tens of thousands of people responded, largely from the hippie culture, and dozens of Indian style ashrams were established. At the same time Rawat was criticised by Christian religious scholars on the basis of his youth, his behaviour and his teachings.[6][7][8]

''In 1971 Rawat traveled to Britain and the US where he was the subject of substantial media attention.[5] Formed by Rawat’s US followers a separate US Divine Light Mission was registered with the IRS, in December 1971. Rawat returned to the US in 1972, accompanied by his mother and elder brother. Tens of thousands of people, largely drawn from the hippie culture, were initiated into the Rawat Knowledge and Indian style ashrams were established. Rawat was criticised by religious scholars on the basis of his youth, his behaviour and his teachings.[6][7][8]'' A separate DLM was created in the UK in 1972, subsequently other Nationally independent DLM organisations were created in Australia, South Africa, and Canada, as well as in several European and South American countries.

Rawat's desire to manifest his own vision brought him into conflict with his mother, and his marriage to an American follower in 1974 caused a permanent split.[9][10] From this point Rawat and his teachings became more Western, and in the early 1980s he abandoned the title and trappings of a guru, closed the ashrams and changed his style to appeal to a Western audience. Prem Rawat currently makes his message available by video, print and television in eighty-eight countries, assisted by the 2001 established Prem Rawat Foundation, which also spearheads international humanitarian efforts.[11][12]

''Rawat's desire to manifest his own vision brought him into conflict with his mother and family, and his marriage to an American follower in 1974 caused a permanent split.[9][10] In the early 1980s Rawat personally renounced the trappings of Indian culture and religion and the Divine Light Mission was renamed Elan Vital, the title under which it continues to operate. The Prem Rawat Foundation was established in 2001 to promote Rawat’s message in video, print, and television, as well as to support humanitarian efforts.[11][12]''

In April 1974 Rawat, now aged sixteen, became an emancipated minor, and in May married 25 year old Marolyn Johnson, one of his American students. [29] The marriage to a non-Indian finally severed Rawat's relationship with his mother, who disowned him and returned to India with his two elder brothers. There she gained legal control of DLM India and appointed the eldest brother, Satpal, as leader. Rawat took control of the Western DLM and declared himself its sole source of spiritual authority. Most of the mahatmas in the West either returned to India or were fired.[30][31][32]

''In April 1974 Rawat then aged sixteen became an emancipated minor and in May married 25 year old Marolyn Johnson, one of his American followers. [29] The marriage and differences over behaviour and lifestyle caused the severence of Rawat's relationship with his mother, who disowned him and returned to India with his two elder brothers. The DLM in India came under the effective control of the elder brother, Sat Pal Maharaj. Rawat took control of the Western DLM and declared himself its sole source of spiritual authority.[30][31][32]''

After the split with his mother, Rawat and non-Indian DLM became more Western and secular.[33] Rawat encouraged students to leave the ashram and discard Indian terminology and customs.[34] Staff at DLM's Denver HQ were reduced from 250 to 80, and Rawat became financially independent through the contributions of his Western devotees which allowed him to follow the lifestyle of an American millionaire, support his wife and children, and finance the world travel of staff.[35][36]

''From the end of 1973 DLM was moving in a more secular direction and Rawat is seen to have inspired greater autonomy amongst the DLM membership when in January 1976 he expressed the hope that residency in the western ashrams would be of a tempory nature. Previously Indian style terminology was westernised and staff numbers at DLM's Denver HQ were reduced from 250 to 80. Rawat became financially independent through the contributions of his Western devotees which allowed him to follow the lifestyle of an American millionaire and support his wife, his brother, Raja Ji, and his wife, Claudia. Continued donations to DLM financed the world travel of Rawat and his staff.[35][36]'' In 1980, Rawat's activities included the development of an executive jet refurbishing facility known as DECA. The first project was the customization of a Boeing 707 for his work. During 1981, Rawat flew the 707 to South America, Europe, India, Nepal, Australia, New Zealand and Malaysia. DECA was later sold to Aircraft Modular Products (AMP), which in turn was sold in 1998 to B/E Aerospace for US$118 million.[42][43]

''In 1979 the resources of DLM were committed to plans to refurbish a Boeing 707 that would be used to facilitate Rawat’s international mission. A plane was acquired and work took place in Florida at a facility subsequently acquired by Aircraft Modular Products (AMP), a company which was in turn sold to B/E Aerospace. Work on the 707 was completed in 1981 and with a co pilot, Rawat flew the plane to South America, Europe, India, Nepal, Australia, New Zealand and Malaysia. [42][43]''

Rawat returned to India in October 1980 after an absence of five years, and on newly acquired land in Delhi spoke to over 38,000 people. He also revisited South America, going to Mexico for the first time. He held large, multi-day events for his students in Colombia (Cartagena), Miami, Rome, London, New Delhi and Kansas City, and also spoke at programs in Cancun, Lima, Sao Paulo and Leicester (UK).[44]

''Rawat returned to India in October 1980 after an absence of five years, and on newly acquired land in Delhi spoke to over 38,000 people. He also revisited South America, going to Mexico for the first time. Large, multi-day events where held in Colombia (Cartagena), Miami, Rome, London, New Delhi and Kansas City, Rawat also spoke at programs in Cancun, Lima, Sao Paulo and Leicester (UK).[44]''

In the early 1980s, Rawat moved to disband the Divine Light Mission. Renouncing the trappings of Indian culture and religion, he regularly addressed audiences in places as culturally diverse as India, Japan, Taiwan, the Ivory Coast, Slovenia, Mauritius and Venezuela, as well as North America, Europe and the South Pacific.[45]

In 1983 the downsized Divine Light Mission changed its name to Elan Vital, and Rawat closed the last western ashrams, marking the end of Rawat's use of Indian methods for western objectives.[46]

''In the early 1980s Rawat personally renounced the trappings of Indian culture and religion. Documents held by the IRS show that there were moves in the US to replace the religious status DLM with a public foundation (ref: 06.02.1985 Letter 1045(00) (6-22), however the US DLM in common with DLMs in other countries was simply renamed Elan Vital, the only exception being the UK Charity which closed in 1993 Rawat traveled widely and regularly addressed audiences in places as culturally diverse as India, Japan, Taiwan, the Ivory Coast, Slovenia, Mauritius and Venezuela, as well as North America, Europe and the South Pacific.[45][46]''

Rawat continued to tour internationally throughout the 1980s and 1990s, mostly piloting the executive jets leased for the purpose himself. He held events in over 40 countries, and in 1990 spoke at over 50 public events across the world. In December 1998, Rawat spoke via a live, interactive global satellite broadcast from Pasadena, California to 86,600 participants at 173 locations in 50 countries. 1999 saw the commencement of regular satellite broadcasts to North American cities, with similar initiatives started in other countries soon after.[49][50]

''Rawat continued to tour internationally throughout the 1980s and 1990s, events were held in over 40 countries, and in 1990 alone Rawat spoke at over 50 public events across the world. In December 1998, Rawat spoke via a live, interactive global satellite broadcast from Pasadena, California to 86,600 participants at 173 locations in 50 countries. 1999 saw the commencement of regular satellite broadcasts to North American cities, with similar initiatives started in other countries soon after.[49][50]''

''Between 1965 and July 2005 Rawat spoke at 2,280 events around the world. Between January 2004 and June 2005, he delivered 117 addresses in Asia, Europe, and North America. His message is currently distributed in eighty-eight countries on video and in print, and is broadcast on TV channels such as Canal Infinito in South America, Channel 31 in Australia, Kabel BW in Germany and Dish Network in the U.S.A.[51][52][53]''

In 2001, The Prem Rawat Foundation was founded as a Public Charitable Organization, largely for the production and distribution of materials promoting Rawat's message. It also funds international humanitarian efforts, providing water, food and medical relief to war-torn and impoverished areas. After passing an evaluation by the Better Business Bureau in 2007, the Foundation became a recommended charity of the Wise Giving Alliance. Rotary International describes TPRF as being established "to improve the quality of life for the disadvantaged."[54][55] [56][57][58][59]

''In 2001, The Prem Rawat Foundation was founded as a Public Charitable Organization, largely for the production and distribution of materials promoting Rawat's message. It also funds international humanitarian efforts, providing water, food and medical relief to war-torn and impoverished areas.[54]''

After the split with his family, Rawat declared himself the sole spiritual authority in the Mission,[73] removed many of the Hindu beliefs and Indian trappings, and focused his teachings more on the experience of Knowledge.[74][75]In the early 80s he closed the ashrams, relinquished the remaining Hindu traditions, dropped the title "Guru" and spoke to audiences as Maharaji, a teacher. His work continued to be supported by a new, minimal organization, Elan Vital.

''After the split with his family in 1974, Rawat declared himself the sole spiritual authority in the Mission,[73] and changed the style of his message and relinquished the Hindu tradition, beliefs, and most of the eastern religious practices inherited from his father. In the 1980s the ashrams were closed and Rawat asked to be called Maharaji and not Guru.''

Practitioners describe Knowledge as internal and highly individual, without social structure, liturgy or articles of faith, and say that Rawat teaches no beliefs or ethical practices.[75][76] Rawat advises students that for maximum benefit the techniques should be practised daily for at least one hour.[77][78][79]

''What Rawat calls Knowledge is attained through initiation, now formalised as the sixth Key, which provides four techniques that allow the practitioner to go within. [75][76] Rawat teaches no beliefs or ethical practices, he advises students that for maximum benefit the techniques should be practised daily for at least one hour.[77][78][79]''

In 2005, Rawat introduced a process of self-paced preparation for receiving Knowledge known as The Keys. The package consists of five videos which prepare the student for learning and practising the techniques. The sixth video is the "Knowledge Session," a multimedia presentation available in fifty languages. A small fee is requested to cover postage and packing, but the techniques are taught without charge.[80]

''In 2005, Rawat introduced a process of self-paced preparation for receiving Knowledge known as The Keys. The package consists of five videos which prepare the student for learning and practising the techniques. The sixth video is the "Knowledge Session," a multimedia presentation available in fifty languages. A fee is requested to cover postage and packing, but the techniques are taught without charge.[80]''

A U.S. citizen since 1977,[81]Rawat lives with his wife in Malibu, California. They have four grown children. He holds an Airline Transport Pilot License and has type ratings for a number of fixed-wing aircraft and helicopters.[82] His résumé lists skills in computer graphics, computer-aided design and the development of aviation software. He is listed as co-inventor on a U.S. patent for a world-time aviational watch.[83] He reports that he supports himself and his family as a private investor, and that he has contributed to the success of several startup companies in various industries, including software.[84]

''A U.S. citizen since 1977,[81]Rawat lives with his wife in Malibu, California. They have four grown children. He holds an Airline Transport Pilot License and has type ratings for a number of fixed-wing aircraft and helicopters.[82] His résumé lists skills in computer graphics, computer-aided design and the development of aviation software. He is listed as co-inventor on a U.S. patent for a world-time aviational watch.[83] He reports that he supports himself and his family as a private investor, and that he has contributed to the success of several startup companies in various industries, including software, although he does not identify these companies by name.[84]''

--Nik Wright2 15:55, 16 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Thanks. These are minor semantic changes that could be contemplated, with the exception of a few ones about which there are ni sources. I will let others look into these and decide if any of these proposed changes are useful. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 16:01, 16 June 2007 (UTC)


 * I've already addressed NikW's first point at length and provided NikW with overwhelming scholastic material that Rawat teaches more than just the four techniques but to no avail (and removed his unacceptable BLP attack). But since I'm here, why would Rawat need to "identify these companies by name"? He doesn't identify his children or house by name, so perhaps they don't exist either.Momento 21:25, 18 June 2007 (UTC)


 * There is such a thing as privacy, and especially in a BLP it has to be respected. From what I have read lately of Jimbo Wales' opinion on this matter, it is soon going to become even clearer. Rumiton 02:05, 19 June 2007 (UTC)

Nik's Proposed Amendments
Just had time to read your suggestions, which I think have merit, but also present some problems. I am sorry you were working from a previous version of the article. Numerous small changes have since been made working towards Good Article status. This was my fault for not updating the Bio Prop. I have now rectified this.

1. I think the sources are clear that Prem Rawat has been a "teacher" on the subject of inner peace, and not merely a "speaker."

2. I agree that "at the same time" is wordy and redundant, as well as possibly confusing, as it could mean something like "...but then again."

3. I have no problem with saying that the DLM was registered by his followers, provided that sources concur.

4. You speak of the various DLMs being "separate," "separate" and "nationally independent." I think just saying they were set up independently should be enough.

5. The term "the Rawat Knowledge" does not seem to occur elsewhere. Similarly your "what Rawat calls Knowledge." The definition of Knowledge has been given elsewhere in the text. Please look at the new paragraph re The Keys.

6. According to Chryssides and Melton, the DLM was "dissolved" and "disbanded," not "renamed." They clearly saw the differences in size and function as constituting a new organisation.

7. I like your sentence starting with "The Prem Rawat Foundation was established..." better than the current sentence. It is more succinct, and the kind of editing that will help us towards GA.

8. According to sources, Prem Rawat's mother was the one who gained legal control of DLM India, and she appointed her eldest son as its leader. I think this is an interesting fact that should be retained.

9. Similarly the sentence about the Indian mahatmas who came to the US and Europe.

10. Your sentence "...Rawat is seen to have inspired greater autonomy amongst the DLM membership when in January 1976 he expressed the hope that residency in the western ashrams would be of a tempory nature" I find rather clumsy and long-winded. I think what exists now, while saying much the same thing, is more succinct and carries more weight.

11. Your references to DECA have become moot, as we can find no reputable source that links Prem Rawat with DECA. The article currently does not mention it. As I said before, if you can find a reputable source that establishes a relationship between Prem Rawat and DECA, please supply it.

12. Your sentence that starts "Documents held by the IRS..." seems scarcely relevant. I am not sure what a "public foundation" in US law is, but it seems unworthy of mention. If you can show otherwise, please do.

13. As discussed before, I believe most people would be interested in the legal and commercial status of the TPRF, and I would retain the reference.

14. You write "...although he does not identify these companies by name." Neither he should. Privacy prevails, and correctly so. A Wiki article is not a tax investigation, nor any other kind of investigation. How would it be if a Wiki editor rang up a subject and said: "I am doing an article on you. Please provide me with all your financial details."

Thanks for the suggestions. If there are no other objections, after 24 hours we can make the approved changes. Rumiton 11:57, 19 June 2007 (UTC)


 * While you're at it, I think the lede is out of proportion. It has 5 sentences to describe June 71 until 1974 and only 2 from 74 to 2007. How about ""In June, 1971 Rawat left India to speak in London and Los Angeles, where he was the subject of substantial media attention. By 1973 Rawat had visited Japan, Australia, Europe and South Africa and tens of thousands of followers were attracted, largely from the hippie culture, and dozens of Indian style ashrams were established. His marriage to an American follower in 1974 caused a permanent split with his mother and from this point Rawat and his teachings became more Western. In the early 1980s he stopped using the title "guru", closed the ashrams and abandoned the traditional Indian religious trappings in which the techniques originated". And then some more about the 80s to now.Momento 20:34, 20 June 2007 (UTC)


 * I like that, but really, I feel the whole article is overwhelmed by material from the early 70s, not just the lead section. The problem with more about the 80s to now is that reputable scholars have not seen fit to investigate Prem Rawat's recent work. It seems that there needed to be an organisation to peak their interest. Unless you have some more recent sources? Rumiton 09:25, 21 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Looking again, I see your suggestion omits the sentences about criticism. Probably not a good idea. The article already errs, it seems to me, on the promotional side. We need to be plainly NPOV, and the criticism was certainly there. Rumiton 14:16, 21 June 2007 (UTC)

The '70s were clearly a time of great interest but the lede should stay roughly in proportion to the article ie Childhood, Leaving India, Coming of Age, Westernisation, Recent Years, Teachings, Personal. As for criticism, I think Andries' RfM will determine that the majority of scholarly criticism appears in Christian published magazines and is therefore biased.Momento 22:35, 21 June 2007 (UTC)

Then perhaps we should wait for the outcome. When does the RfM take place? Rumiton 03:47, 22 June 2007 (UTC)

Alternate Version for Comparison
I’ve copied the updated version from Rawat Bioproposal nr2 to  for comparison and in case there is some chance of convergence. I would suggest that editors look carefully at this version and rather than dismiss it provide careful and detailed arguments about what if anything is wrong. It is not my intention to edit war and if editors here want to revert  that’s fine, though I will continue to work for my preferred version at Rawat Bioproposal nr2

--Nik Wright2 10:55, 6 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Nik, as far as I can see, all the points you raise in this proposal have been dealt with by "careful and detailed argument" before. I suggest you read carefully through the Discussion archives. If you have any truly new sources, then by all means let's look at them. But editors who persist in presenting already rejected material risk being labelled "time-wasters," a form of misbehaviour looked on as seriously as any other by the Wikipedia admin. Rumiton 11:25, 6 July 2007 (UTC)