Talk:Pressure system/GA1

GA Review
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Disambiguation check: ✅

Checklinks: 4 dead (Ref #'s 5, 10, 25, 19)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
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 * Pass/Fail:

Prose is very good. Only one issue while reading, under Low pressure system in first paragraph a closing parentheses seems to be missing:
 * ...within the Westerlies (a trough with large wavelength which extends through the (troposphere).

Fix this and the dead links and I'll pass the article.

Reviewer: Lvi56 (talk) 05:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Found/replaced 3 of the 4 dead links. As it turns out, former ref 10 wasn't necessary as the other refs, particularly the one now at #10, described it well enough on their own.  The parenthesis problem has been fixed.  Thegreatdr (talk) 06:08, 27 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Looks good. I went ahead and fixed the red link that was under the High pressure section. I'll pass the article, good work!Lvi56 (talk) 06:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)