Talk:Pretty Much Dead Already/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: --Gen. Quon (talk) 17:38, 25 February 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * " Rick Grimes (Andrew Lincoln) reminds him that they're guests on Hershel Greene's (Scott Wilson) property and they could not leave without Sophia Peletier (Madison Lintz)" Should change "could" to "can"
 * "The death of Sophia Peletier is a major theme in the episode." I'm not so sure that's as much of a theme as it is a plot point. Maybe re-write this section to say "The death of Sophia Peletier is a major incident in "Pretty Much Dead Already," largely effecting the themes of the episode."
 * Wikilink "Secrets" in the ratings section
 * Watch for contractions: doesn't, isn't, aren't. There is quite a few in the plot section.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Are there references for who wrote, directed and guest starred in the episode?
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days to straighten out the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:05, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
 * All done. Should be good to go. :) —DAP388 (talk) 22:35, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good! I pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:10, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days to straighten out the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:05, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
 * All done. Should be good to go. :) —DAP388 (talk) 22:35, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good! I pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:10, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
 * On hold for seven days to straighten out the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:05, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
 * All done. Should be good to go. :) —DAP388 (talk) 22:35, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good! I pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:10, 27 February 2012 (UTC)