Talk:Pretty Please (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:37, 13 July 2022 (UTC)

I will start this today, though it won't be done until at least tomorrow. --K. Peake 09:37, 13 July 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Add a comma after second studio album
 * "and the song's producer" → "and the sole producer"
 * Add a sentence between the writing/production and genres one about how the song was created
 * "is the opposite. In the lyrics," → "is the opposite; in the lyrics,"
 * Remove the usage of very per this not being sourced in the body
 * "reached number 48, 79 and" → "reached numbers 48, 79 and"
 * "was awarded a gold certification from" → "was awarded a gold certification in Canada from"
 * "remix album Club Future Nostalgia." → "remix album, Club Future Nostalgia (2020)."
 * Mention that the festival was in 2022 and use "that same year" later on in the sentence

Background and production

 * Img looks good!
 * Pipe mixed to Audio mixing (recorded music)
 * Pipe mastered to Mastering (audio)
 * "a bunch of music" I don't think this is appropriate language for Wiki
 * Wikilink bassline
 * "before the chorus. Kirkpatrick used" → "before the chorus and Kirkpatrick used" with the pipe
 * Wikilink tempo
 * Pipe percussion to Percussion instrument
 * "lag a bit" is this really appropriate language?
 * "He used LFO tool" → "Kirkpatrick used LFO tool"
 * "Kirkpatrick used the LFO tool to make" → "The tool also had the purpose of making"
 * "He also used a" → "Kirkpatrick further used a"
 * Pipe snare to Snare drum
 * Img looks good!
 * "decided to leave it in" → "decided to leave the instrument in"
 * "he wanted to make it" → "the producer wanted to make it"
 * "in the hook. Kirkpatrick used an" → "in the hook and used an"
 * "he included a part from" → "the producer included a section from"
 * Wikilink melodyne per MOS:LINK2SECT

Music and lyrics

 * Remove wikilink on midtempo
 * Remove wikilink on tempo
 * [12][13][14][15][9] is too many refs grouped together, so move some around to the appropriate areas of the sentence
 * [19] should only be invoked once in the sentence
 * Wikilink synthesizer
 * "for stress-reliving" → "for stress-relieving" on the audio sample text
 * "the live bass. This chorus also introduces a beeping sounds." → "the live bass while beeping sounds are introduced."
 * Wikilink tambourine
 * I don't think spine-tingling is very neutral here
 * "when she sings" → "when Lipa sings"
 * "but realizing that unlike them." what does this mean? Please clarify...
 * "sums up the song's" → "sum up the song's"

Release and promotion

 * Img looks good!
 * Wikilink lyric video per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "released on 9 April." → "released on 9 April 2020."
 * Pipe New York house to Garage house
 * Pipe acoustic to Acoustic music
 * Pipe Tiny Desk Concert to Tiny Desk Concerts

Reception

 * "on Future Nostalgia saying" → "on Future Nostalgia, saying"
 * "called it a "slinky" monster and stated it's" → "called the song a "slinky" monster and stated it is"
 * "complimented "airtight" and" → "complimented the "airtight" and"
 * "Writing for, Pitchfork Anna Gaca noted" → "For Pitchfork, Anna Gaca noted"
 * Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
 * "a "flurry of" → "a "flurr[y] of" per alteration of the source
 * "called it a" → "labeled the song a"
 * "The Midland refix was nominated" → "The Midland remix was nominated"
 * "79 in Slovakia and 101" → "number 79 in Slovakia and number 101"

Track listings

 * Add the appropriate sources for these

Personnel

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 19:59, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
 * ❌ after no response; this is disappointing from an experienced user like LOVI33. --K. Peake 07:42, 2 August 2022 (UTC)