Talk:Prevention and Combating of Hate Crimes and Hate Speech Bill

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 August 2018 and 5 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Easen98.

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Try to put the citations at the end of the sentences. Missing citation after third sentence.Emmapdonahue (talk) 19:11, 15 October 2018 (UTC) Remove word "vague" from 4th sentence; implies bias of source.Emmapdonahue (talk) 19:13, 15 October 2018 (UTC) Perhaps include more background about policies and living standard during apartheid--would round out article and give you more to write about.Emmapdonahue (talk) 19:17, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

Try to watch for passive voice in your article. Eg "has continually struggled". Also, try not to use so many descriptive words such as "immense" that make your background paragraph sound biased. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Danielleaar (talk • contribs) 23:30, 15 October 2018 (UTC)