Talk:Prides Crossing station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:05, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 17:30, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
 * What's a "flag stop"?
 * ✅ linked.
 * "(B&M) in 1885. The B&M operated" repetitive, why not just "(B&M) in 1885 which operated"?
 * ✅ Reworded.
 * " level crossing" link.
 * "a one-story stick style now" maybe Briteng, but feels like there's a word missing, like "construction" after the style.
 * ✅ Added the missing word.
 * "The Gloucester Branch opened to" overlinked.
 * I see "wealthy residents " is linked to the section on "notable residents" - do we know they all used this station?
 * On the 8:02 and Beverly Revisited don't refer to specific residents, but state that they were well-used by the wealthy residents. I've added citations that specifically list several of them using the station, and several others arriving on private sidings.
 * "February 1, 1981 due" comma after year.
 * "lasted into" continued into.
 * I think the existing phrasing works fine.
 * "The NTSB determined" don't use acronyms without explaining them first.
 * Salem link?
 * "mini-high platforms " what are those?
 * "was nominated for closures " why plural?
 * ✅ Typo fixed.
 * Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * Spaced hyphen in ref titles should be spaced en-dash.
 * "MBTA - Prides Crossing" also should be an en-dash.
 * Is the "depot" building the same as the station building? If not, it only seems to be mentioned in the lead.  If so, I'm confused.
 * ✅ Yes, the same building. I've standardized on "station" to clarify
 * Where is "fare zone 5" mentioned or referenced?
 * ✅ Ref added.
 * Montserrat is not mentioned in the article other than in the infobox.
 * That's a navigation template, standard for station articles.
 * "MBTA - Prides Crossing" also should be an en-dash.
 * Is the "depot" building the same as the station building? If not, it only seems to be mentioned in the lead.  If so, I'm confused.
 * ✅ Yes, the same building. I've standardized on "station" to clarify
 * Where is "fare zone 5" mentioned or referenced?
 * ✅ Ref added.
 * Montserrat is not mentioned in the article other than in the infobox.
 * That's a navigation template, standard for station articles.
 * Montserrat is not mentioned in the article other than in the infobox.
 * That's a navigation template, standard for station articles.
 * Thanks for the review! I believe I've addressed all your items above. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 05:49, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok, happy with that so passing. Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 08:07, 12 March 2021 (UTC)