Talk:Primary line constants/GA1

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Reviewer: Reaper Eternal (talk · contribs) 10:31, 7 August 2013 (UTC)

Hi! I'm currently working on reviewing this article. I should be back in a couple of days or less with my review. Good luck! Reaper Eternal (talk) 10:31, 7 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Thanks for reviewing Reaper. I look forward to seeing your review.   Spinning  Spark  11:48, 7 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "The primary line constants are parameters that describe the characteristics of copper or other conductive material transmission lines in terms of the physical electrical properties of the line." – Since this article is about the constants describing transmission lines rather than the transmission lines themselves, I don't think the red part is necessary. It's awkwardly positioned and really doesn't add anything, since all electrical transmission lines use copper or other conductive materials. The phrase could probably also be replaced with just "electrical", which would concisely describe what type of transmission lines are being discussed.


 * The constants
 * Am I correct in assuming that the table is sourced to references [1] and [2]?


 * Measurement of primary line constants
 * This section is completely empty!


 * Typical values for some common cables
 * This table could probably benefit from an introductory sentence or two.
 * What do blank table cells mean, that the value is negligible?


 * Circuit representation
 * In the circuits, you show the small element variables like $$\delta L$$. However, in the calculations, you refer to the infinitesimal elements like $$dL$$. I don't really know if it is necessary to explain how you got from small to infinitesimal, since it is likely that the only people who will read this section are familiar with basic calculus. However, it might be nice to include a sentence like: "To give a true representation of the circuit, the elements must be made infinitesimally small so that each element is distributed along the line as shown in figure 1. Thus, $\delta L \rightarrow dL$, $\delta C \rightarrow dC$, and $\delta R \rightarrow dR$. The infinitesimal elements in an infinitesimal distance $dx$ are given by...." Feel free to take or leave this suggestion.
 * The clause, "...the elements must be made infinitesimally small so that each element is distributed along the line as shown in figure 1", is confusing since it implies the variables $$\delta L$$ and others are infinitesimals.


 * Characteristic impedance
 * This section looks good.


 * Propagation constant
 * The first sentence makes it sound like $$\delta x$$ is an infinitesimal. I thought $$dx$$ was the infinitesimal. Is this what you meant?


 * Special cases
 * This section looks good.


 * Notes
 * You have almost no metadata for your web references.


 * References
 * All sources are reliable, which is excellent.
 * Why is title capitalization not being used for the latter three titles?


 * Overall
 * This is a good technical article that mostly covers the topic. Apart from the one empty section, I don't see any significant omissions. Some reference formatting and clarification issues remain, but I don't see why this shouldn't pass GAN after these issues are fixed. Thanks for your hard work! Reaper Eternal (talk) 13:25, 7 August 2013 (UTC)

Responses from Spinningspark
Not looked at the history, but the cack-handed wording probably arose because I wrote "copper lines" (a common enough shorthand in telecommunications, and mostly accurate since lines are invariablly made of copper) and someone else followed on trying to make it more precise. I don't think we can just say "transmission lines" since many sources will include waveguides in the class of transmission line. There are also dielectric waveguides which include no metal at all. Can we agree on "...of conductive trasmission lines, such as pairs of copper wires, in terms..."  Spinning Spark  15:08, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * copper lines
 * That seems reasonable. Reaper Eternal (talk) 15:37, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Done.  Spinning Spark  17:54, 7 August 2013 (UTC)

The table is merely a list of the constants. Nothing controversial there. What is the problem?  Spinning Spark  15:08, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Table
 * I'm referring to the table under "Typical values for some common cables". Specifically, there is no introductory text to describe what the table is and why it is there. Additionally, adding introductory text will allow you to move footnote #5, which isn't a reference, into the main text. Reaper Eternal (talk) 12:42, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the confusion, I was responding to your comment on the table in "The constants" section. I have removed #5 from the endnotes and made it a footnote to the table.  I don't really know what introductory text could be added that has not been said in the previous section.  It is a table of typical values of some common tables.  The heading says it all already.  Spinning  Spark  21:41, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be made explicit that the limit of δL is dL etc. Basic maths and the article already says something equivalent. However, I have added that δL=Lδx etc. I have moved the ref to figure 1 to clarify.  Spinning Spark  15:08, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Circuit representation
 * Okay. Thanks. Reaper Eternal (talk) 12:42, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Yes, you are right. Deleted "inifinitesimal".  Spinning Spark  15:24, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Propagation constant
 * Thanks. Reaper Eternal (talk) 12:42, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

This was added by Constant314. There is some discussion on the talk page. I know perfectly well how to make these measurements as I have done it regularly as part of my professional duties. The problem is the lack of sources. The alternatives we have, unless you can point to a source, are to delete the section or write something unsourced.  Spinning Spark  15:24, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Empty section
 * Would this source work? Reaper Eternal (talk) 15:37, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately not. The linked article is about power distribution and the "constants" they are talking about are what we would call source impedance in telecomms.  They are talking about the properties of primary lines (primary-line constants) whereas we are talking about the primary constants of lines (primary line-constants).  Spinning  Spark  17:47, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay. I didn't know if the principles still applied. Removing the empty section is a good idea then. Reaper Eternal (talk) 12:28, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Capitalization fixed.  Spinning Spark  15:56, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * References
 * Thanks. Reaper Eternal (talk) 12:28, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

The links are mostly to data sheets which often do not have much in the way of metadata to cite. What were you looking for?  Spinning Spark  15:56, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Notes
 * I was looking for what you added in your latest edit. ;) Reaper Eternal (talk) 12:28, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Are you sure that capitalising Figure is consistent with MOS:CAP?  Spinning Spark  09:37, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Figures
 * (Pardon the interruption; I was browsing the Engineering GA noms and saw this) - I was wondering this when I reviewed your other nomination. It seems to me that capitalising Figure in-line would be appropriate because in some way you are referring to a figure by its title, "Figure X".  But I wasn't sure then and I'm not sure now.  MOS:CAP doesn't appear to have anything definite either way, but if someone finds something definitive one way or another I'd like to know.  Corvus coronoides  talk 03:05, 9 August 2013 (UTC)
 * The opening sentence of the MOS is Wikipedia avoids unnecessary capitalization. Seems to me that is making the pretty definite statement that the default is not to capitalise for situations that do not explicitly mandate caps.  I have several articles that have reached FA (Mechanical filter, Distributed element filter) which use lowercase for figure and the review of at least one of them explicitly discussed this very issue.  The Chicago Manual of Style calls for lowercase references to chapter numbers which I would maintain is a comparable situation.  In fact, thinking about it, figures are even lower down the hierarchy than chapters since the former are contained within the latter.  Spinning  Spark  10:56, 9 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Ehh, I guess lowercase is fine, although every single citation system that I know of uses uppercase "Figure ##" and "Table ##" cross-referencing. Reaper Eternal (talk) 12:24, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I appear to have started this thread on the wrong article. Apologies for the mistake, Antimetric electrical network was the article in question, not this one.  Pinging User:Corvus coronoides.  In response to your comment, citations are not running text which is what Chicago is talking about.  Spinning  Spark  21:41, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

In looking at the table question above I realised the article could do with a section on velocity to explain the effect of C on velocity, especially for low-loss cable. Sorry for giving you something more to review.  Spinning Spark  21:41, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Velocity
 * That's fine! I don't mind reviewing additional content if gaps in the article's coverage are discovered. I've given everything a final review, and I believe this article meets everything required in WP:WIAGA. The prose is of good quality, there are no real gaps in knowledge save the one explained above, sourcing is good, and the images are being used in accordance with copyright. There are no edit wars or biases present. Thus, I am passing this article. Thank you for your contributions! Reaper Eternal (talk) 12:29, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for your efforts in reviewing this article. I will keep a look out for sources on measurement techniques, but there really doesn't seem to be much out there.  Spinning  Spark  13:30, 21 August 2013 (UTC)