Talk:Prime Minister of Vietnam/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:01, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Although I don't like politics that much, I am surprised how long it stayed in the queue (for almost 6 months!)--Kürbis (✔) 10:01, 9 October 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Not bad, but I expected a much larger article. Nevermind, here are my comments:
 * "and the term is renewable once" - I think this word is not appropiate here (I think it is more a scientific word), so perhaps replace it with a simple word like "changed"
 * "Renewable" is a better word then "Changed" in this instance. --TIAYN (talk) 20:18, 12 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Done "The current prime minister Nguyen Tan Dung has served since 2005, and is now serving his last term." - you already state this, so the last part is partially redundant. I am not sure how to reword that, though.
 * Done "The National Assembly by a proposal of the President of Vietnam elects the prime minister. " - reads a bit awkward, how about: The National Assembly elects the prime minister by a proposal of the President of Vietnam.
 * Done "and it is the Assembly which elects all ministers to government."
 * Done "When the prime minister is absent, the prime minister must choose one of his deputy prime ministers to direct the work of the government.[10]" - replace the underlined with "he"
 * Done The Bui reference does not lead to any citation--Kürbis (✔) 09:02, 10 October 2012 (UTC)