Talk:Prince Bernhard's titi monkey/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Etriusus (talk · contribs) 02:36, 29 November 2022 (UTC)

Lets get this reviewed.

Copy-vios

 * It is estimated that it will lose 44.5% of its current range over the next 24 years (three generations). A bit too close to the original, bordering on close-paraphrasing.
 * I mixed it up a little. It should be better now.

Images

 * Rights are in order
 * I found on the commons if you want to add it.

Prose

 * would recommend collapsing Etymology and Taxonomy.
 * I see in FN 1 that the species was discovered in 1998. This article says 2002. Thoughts?
 * Where does it say that? I looked through that and a few other sources and the only date I have seen is 2002.
 * The specimen apparently died from natural causes and was collected by M. G. M. van Roosmalen in November 1998. Correction, it was FN 2.
 * Well, 2002 was when it was first described, but I added a mention of this as well.
 * There are a few details that could be added from FN 1 but I won't quibble over relatively minor bits of info. The differences between it and closely related species would be nice to add.
 * I included some of these details.
 * I included some of these details.


 * Thermoregulation can be expanded and should be reworded for a more encyclopedic tone. Source goes very in depth.
 * I improved the tone and added some detail, although I didn't want to risk WP:INDISCRIMINATE by going too in-depth. It should be sufficient the way it currently is.

That's really all I could find. The page is very well written overall and a few expansions/clarifications are needed. I made some minor clarifications, feel free to double check my edits. On Hold. Etrius ( Us) 02:36, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
 * How does it look now? An anonymous username, not my real name  04:28, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Excellent work!! I gave the page a second pass and there are no major issues relevant to GA criteria. Page passes. Congrats!!! Etrius ( Us) 13:49, 1 December 2022 (UTC)