Talk:Prince Marko/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Redtigerxyz (talk · contribs) 05:13, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Is Musa Kesedžija and Musa the outlaw same?
 * What is sister-in-God/brother-in-God ?
 * Why not use blood brother? brother-in-God doesn't seem to be right English (I don't know the term). -- Redtigerxyz Talk 12:48, 4 July 2013 (UTC)


 * "In modern culture" needs cleanup. Citations missing for most of the section . Redtigerxyz  Talk 06:07, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, Musa Kesedžija and Musa the Outlaw are the same person. I changed Outlaw to Kesedžija for consistency.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 17:27, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I've clarified that Momčilo "...was described as a man of immense size" and that he was murdered by Vukašin. I hope I've addressed your concerns with regard to prose. As for, sister-in-God/brother-in-God− I believe it's another way of saying sister-in-law and brother-in-law. I'll fix that promptly. Also, I'll address the other issues as soon as I, or someone else find(s) some sources to put into the Modern Culture section. Regards, 23 editor (talk) 17:59, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Without the unreferenced section too, the article is very broad in coverage. So if you remove it, I could pass the article if no other issues. Redtigerxyz  Talk 04:32, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
 * If this article is about a person, please add  along with the required parameters to the article - see Persondata for more information.[?]
 * Not mandatory suggestion for GA status. Redtigerxyz  Talk 05:11, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.[?]
 * Use of kilograms etc. May be you can use convert. Redtigerxyz  Talk 05:11, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), behavior (A) (British: behaviour), mustache (A) (British: moustache), sabre (B) (American: saber), recognize (A) (British: recognise), ization (A) (British: isation), travelled (B) (American: traveled), skillful (A) (British: skilful), skilful (B) (American: skillful), any more (B) (American: anymore).
 * Replies/Work pending here -- Redtigerxyz Talk 18:57, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I have standardizes as British spelling. -- Redtigerxyz Talk 05:56, 20 July 2013 (UTC)


 * As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
 * I did check which exact instance the script is talking about. Please check all references once. Redtigerxyz  Talk 05:11, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Redtigerxyz  Talk 05:06, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]
 * Alright, I've removed the unsourced section. 23 editor (talk) 17:38, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Striking some out; resolve the remaining. Redtigerxyz  Talk 12:48, 4 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I've removed the money image completely and I've added blood brother instead of "brother-in-God", etc. Further changes are coming. 23 editor (talk) 00:16, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Ref 62 has been fixed. More changes coming. 23 editor (talk) 02:35, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
 * highlighted pending. Please fix asap so we can close this. Redtigerxyz  Talk 18:57, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I've added inline citations after or near dates/quotes.