Talk:Prisoners of the Sun/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 07:31, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 07:31, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Lead

 * Can you wikilink the 2001 musical like you did for the video game?
 * Good point; done! Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:24, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Background

 * "Some Belgians were upset that Hergé was willing to work for a newspaper controlled by the then occupying Nazi administration, although he was heavily enticed by the size of Le Soir's readership, which reached 600,000." - What does "he was heavily enticed" mean in this case?
 * It refers to the fact that he was enticed to work for the newspaper by the prospect of his comic strip getting a far wider readership than it had ever had before. We can reword it if you think it should be clarified ? Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:33, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Influences

 * Farr mentions Columbus using the prediction of a solar eclipse. Can you add that info?
 * Good point - I've added the referenced information here. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:22, 11 March 2015 (UTC)