Talk:Private speech/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 10:29, 1 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Giving the issues in few minutes. Thanks!  TheSpecialUser TSU 10:29, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

I fear that a lot of work should be done on the article in order to get this upto GA standards and I'm extremely sorry that this'll be a quick fail. Here are the primary reasons for the failure:


 * Ref issues - there are plenty of them but all of them are not readable, expect one. They will require ISBN or any link so that the material cited could be verified.
 * Copyediting is required from someone who is expert in the topic and MoS fixes are needed too
 * The article looks a bit small and a topic like this may be expanded perhaps, I believe that this is a bit too incomplete to achieve GA star.
 * Small paragraphs and sections are discouraged in GAs and one paragraph should be at least of 3-4 lines. At present, there are one liners also with no main article thus the topic remains incomplete.
 * Despite of refs, some facts remain unsourced in the article. If you are aiming for GA, each and every fact should cite at least one ref to reliable source using well formatted citation.

I appreciate the efforts but unfortunately, this article is not near to GA status; these issues cannot be addressed easily. Once addressed the concerns above, anyone can re-nominate it. Thank you.  TheSpecialUser TSU 10:42, 1 November 2012 (UTC)