Talk:Professor Popper's Problem/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:06, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 00:06, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Runtime and budget usually have citations in the infobox.
 * That being said, the runtime doesn't need to be sourced in the lead.
 * In the first note, can a more reliable source be added rather than using Amazon.com?
 * Shouldn't BBC (or the network the shorts originally aired in) be mentioned in the infobox or in the lead?
 * Add a comma after "Milo O'Shea".
 * "minaturised" "miniaturised"


 * Corrected everything but the Amazon reference. I searched far and wide for a better source for this info but drew blanks. Not perfect, I know, but one fears I can't do much about this (the woes of detailing obscure films).

Plot and cast

 * "after it find" "after it finds"
 * Add a comma after "Terry, Angus, Carol".
 * I suggest changing "Danger" to "The danger" as it sounds better.
 * The plot section is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Per WP:FILMCAST, roles such as "Headmaster" and "Meter Maid" should be lowercased.


 * Corrected.

Development and direction

 * Don't put AllMovie in italics, in this section and in the rest of the article.
 * Add a comma after "associate producer".
 * "only which" "only one which"


 * Corrected.

Screenplay and visuals

 * Optional, but can the uses of "..." here and in the rest of the article be changed to "[...]"?
 * Instead of a note about the budget, I think it would be easier to use the template for inflation in the UK.


 * Corrected ellipses. I'll confess, I don't know how to use the alternative template. If you feel RPI is insufficient I'd appreciate your own input.

Music

 * Add a comma after "Phil Collins".


 * Corrected.

Response

 * No issues here as this section looks great.

Progress

 * Really appreciate you taking a look at this, Some Dude From North Carolina! Let me know if you require any further input. Curlymanjaro (talk) 22:49, 1 March 2021 (UTC)