Talk:Professor Pyg/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:27, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's it. A very decent and comprehensive article. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 13:06, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
 * supervillain is overlinked in the lead.
 * "that lead him' led.
 * infobox has him as plain old "criminal" but the lead says he's a supervillain.
 * " have "A gimmick. " sentence case.
 * "in Batman #1" I don't know what comic MOS convention is but this is currently breaking across two lines, I would make a non-breaking space between comic title and number.
 * Robin is overlinked.
 * " rogues' gallery" I'm not sure why you're obfuscating "list of enemies".
 * "#43-44" en-dash.
 * No need to link New York City.
 * Beware The Batman and Gotham are overlinked.
 * "wire mother" redirects to Harry Harlow which is also linked in the same sentence.
 * "material.[68][64][62]" order?
 * Are all of those See also links really necessary?
 * Avoid SHOUTING in the ref titles.
 * Spaced hyphens in ref titles etc should be en-dashes.
 * Thanks for taking a look, TRM. I believe I've addressed your concerns. Argento Surfer (talk) 13:25, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
 * No worries, happy with the changes, so promoting the article. Well done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:36, 7 April 2020 (UTC)