Talk:Project Y/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 06:18, 6 November 2016 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:18, 6 November 2016 (UTC) --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:27, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external links OK.
 * Link: ice house, sawmill, barn, stable, garage, Albuquerque Engineer District,
 * ✅ There was no article on the Albuquerque Engineer District, so I've linked it to United States Army Corps of Engineers Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Explain a bit about the Manhattan District vs Manhattan Project.
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Oppenheimer, at this point, had only one "at that point"
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * grade school teachers, 13 high school hyphenate between grade and high school as they're compound adjectives.
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Number of boilers in the heating plant is really getting down into the weeds.
 * on dangerous tasks had not eventuated. awkward, rephrase.
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * with Colonel John M. Harman as commander.[75] He had arrived on 19 January 1943; he was promoted to colonel on 15 February Give his rank as of his assumption of command.
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * were sworn to the United States Army sworn "into" the army
 * ✅ Typo Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * It was decided to use a type of radio altimeter known as the 718, but when the manufacturer, RCA was contacted, it was learned that a new tail warning radar, AN/APS-13, known as Archie, was entering production. How is this relevant?
 * It's the work done at Los Alamos; the development of s suitable bomb fusing mechanism. Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * S-1 Executive Committee's attention before it could be considered further "where" it could be considered...
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * uranium-234, −235 and −238 Standardize on whatever the MoS requires for isotopes.
 * ✅ There's nothing in MOS:CHEM, but I've standardised on the article names. Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * using high explosive shaped charged fix this and be sure to hyphenate high explosive
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 06:39, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Down to Little Boy. More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:29, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Convert 3" and 20mm into the opposite units on first use.
 * ✅ I've never converted proper names before. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:47, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Scale test firing of the hollow projectile and target insert with the 3″/50 caliber gun and a 20 mm Hispano cannon Missing a verb?
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:47, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
 * and was assembled by 1 April fully assembled?
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:47, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
 * avoid the (γ, n) reaction in the beryllium elucidate, please.
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:47, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Link magazine
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:47, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Link and explain relationship between pumpkin bombs and Fat Man
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:47, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Capitalize History in the title of the second Truslow & Smith book.
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:47, 11 November 2016 (UTC)