Talk:Prospect Avenue station (BMT Fourth Avenue Line)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 1.02 editor (talk · contribs) 13:55, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

I will review this also. TRM has taken the rest. 1.02 editor (T/C) 13:55, 17 April 2020 (UTC) Thanks so much!--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:12, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments
Article is already nearly on par with the rest of the articles, just some issues left to be addressed.
 * 'The contract for the section of the line that included the Prospect Avenue station, Route 11A3, which extended from 10th Street to 27th Street, was awarded on May 22, 1908, ' awarded to who?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:45, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Also separate the sentence from the approval part as its very lenghty.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:45, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1920s renovation- Was the platforms extended twice or only once? it currently suggests that there was an extension in 1922 and 1925.
 * The BMT had been supposed to extend them, but did not until 1925. I thought that was clear from the text. How should I clarify this point?--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:45, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * It is mentioned 'On June 27, 1922, the New York State Transit Commission directed its engineers to prepare plans to lengthen the platforms at 23 stations of the Brooklyn–Manhattan Transit Corporation (BMT)' and 'The BMT had been ordered by the Transit Commission to lengthen these platforms since September 1923'. This is what led to it being confusing for me, as i interpreted the second statement as another order to lengthen the platforms. This comes to the question of which date is correct or were they ordered to do it twice? 1.02 editor (T/C) 02:30, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I have clarified this point. epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 2017 renovation- 'updates' change to 'upgrades'
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:45, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Also specify who the contract was awarded to for the 2017 renovation
 * It does specify, saying Citnalta-Forte Joint Venture. It was just in the wrong place in the paragraph. --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:45, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * paragraph on the celing being lower should be removed.
 * I added a citation.✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:45, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I added a citation.✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:45, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Hold
Will be putting the article on hold now. 1.02 editor (T/C) 07:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * thanks for the review. I think Kew Gardens 613 has fixed all these issues. epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Issues have been fixed, passing. 1.02 editor (T/C) 03:46, 25 April 2020 (UTC)