Talk:Protection and monitoring of the electrical energy transmission networks

Dear sirs,

I found a tag on my article untitled "protection and monitoring of the electrical energy transmission network", telling me that this article may require clean up to meet wikipedia's quality standards. Can you tell me more accurately what I have to do?

In this article I give the address of a website that I created, and in which people interessed in this issue can find more information (and many people do so). But all this information is given free of cost, and I do not think that it can be considered as an advertising or a spam.

So please tell me what I have done wrong!

Michel.lami 16:42, 27 March 2007 (UTC)Michel Lami
 * The English grammar in the article is very poor; it almost reads like a mechanical translation. There is no topic sentence in the lead paragraph. There are no proper references. Wikipedia isn't meant to be a link farm and each article must be a substantial discussion of its topic, not just a pointer to some Web site. The article needs a lot of work. --17:39, 27 March 2007 (UTC)


 * On that note, is this something like a paper or other scholarly work? If so, it doesn't belong here. 68.39.174.238 03:28, 3 June 2007 (UTC)