Talk:Proton (satellite program)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DannyS712 (talk · contribs) 07:02, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

Discussion

 * I have marked this GA nomination as "on hold" pending resolution of the few issues I raised above. fyi. Thanks, --DannyS712 (talk) 07:24, 1 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Thank you kindly for getting to this GA so quickly. I am nursing tendinitis so I will make your suggested changes early next week and ping you when they are done. :) Happy New Year! --Neopeius (talk) 02:26, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Changes made. Thanks again! --Neopeius (talk) 02:54, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * @Neopeius looks like I've been misusing "comprised of" for years... thanks for pointing that out. One remaining issue with the different phrasing for "reentered" --DannyS712 (talk) 03:35, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Don't feel bad. "Comprised of" is so common that it's now become acceptable, and only pedants like me get our dander up about it. But since "composed" always has that meaning and can't be used the way "comprised" can, it makes sense to maintain the distinction where possible! --Neopeius (talk) 04:09, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Well, it was nice working with you on this. Happy to declare the GA nomination passed! DannyS712 (talk) 07:12, 4 January 2021 (UTC)