Talk:Pru (album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:43, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * Add
 * Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Pru is the debut studio album by → Pru is the debut and eponymous studio album by
 * Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Can you create a stub about Pru?
 * I may create a stub for Pru in the future, but I do not believe that it is necessary for this review. It also appears that this album is the only notable thing (by WIkipedia's standards) that she has done with her career. I can definitely come back to it in the future, but again I do not believe it is required for the review. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * It spawned two singles: "Candles" and "Aaroma" → It was aided by two single releases, "Candles" and "Aaroma (of a Man)"
 * Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Background

 * said that "Her lyrics were the thing that stood out the most for me → said that "her lyrics were the thing that stood out for [him]
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Recording and sound

 * You should rename the section to "Recording and composition"
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * However, Pru is only credited as co-writing "Aaroma" in the album's liner notes, which lists her by both her full and professional names. → I don't get the meaning of this sentence
 * Removed the last part. I added this part in as the previous sentence claims that Pru contributed to the songwriting for all of the album's tracks, but the album notes say otherwise. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Music critics identified the album as consisting → Music
 * Not sure what you mean by this note. Could you please clarify this for me? Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * New Age music → new age music
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Prior to signing a record deal, the singer → state "she" for alternation
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Top 40 music → top 40 music
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Composition

 * Release year in brackets for "The Tracks of My Tears"
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Hogan, alternatively, interpreted the song as "juxtaposition of the original message from "The Track of My Tears" → ?? + there's something wrong with the syntax
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Release and instrumentation

 * as an "enhanced audio CD" in which → no "in"
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * that included members of the Family Stand → link Family Stand here
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)


 * radio in the US → don't shorten US
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Reception

 * Well done ;)
 * Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Fixed by myself
 * Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Personnel

 * Fixed by myself
 * Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Charts

 * flawless ;)
 * Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Release history

 * Fixed by myself
 * Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Copy-violation

 * 42.2% is slightly too much!
 * If you check that, then you will see the 42.2% is coming from the album credits and that will have a high percentage as there will be the same names and credits for that (it is also directly cited that way in the article). Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Links

 * No problems here!
 * Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Outcome

 * On hold for 7 days! Great article... Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:07, 6 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your comments! I believe that I have addressed all of your comments. Hope you are having a wonderful day so far. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Yes, I am, thanks! I'm passing this. Yay, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:27, 6 May 2017 (UTC)