Talk:Psychological journeys of Middle-earth/GA1

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Some duplinks according to the tool.
 * The only ones I see are in image captions, which is considered acceptable (once in text, once in caption).


 * "Scholars including psychoanalysts have" Commas
 * Added.


 * "stories of" Maybe "about" instead?
 * Done.


 * "Guide figures" Why the capital G?
 * Removed.


 * "On Klein's theory" and "On Vygotsky's theory" isn't "in xyz's theory" a more common construction?
 * Done.


 * "Gollum as Devouring Mother" This was mentioned in the table earlier, but you could add a gloss explaining it here as well.
 * Glossed.


 * The images are all licensed and used correctly.
 * Noted.


 * The references are all reliable and formatted correctly.
 * Spotchecks:
 * Flieger, Verlyn (1996). "Tolkien's Experiment with Time: The Lost Road, The Notion Club Papersand J.W. Dunne". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
 * Matthews, Dorothy (1975). "The Psychological Journey of Bilbo Baggins". In Lobdell, Jared (ed.). A Tolkien Compass. Verifies all claims made.
 * Harl, Allison (2007). "The monstrosity of the gaze: critical problems with a film adaptation of The Lord of the Rings". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
 * Grant, Patrick (1973). "Tolkien: Archetype and Word". Cross Currents (Winter 1973). Verifies all claims made.
 * Noted.


 * Nice article, but I am starting to think that psychoanalysts have entirely too much time on their hands. AryKun (talk) 14:53, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Keeps them from doing anything worse! Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:58, 28 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Okay, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 15:14, 28 July 2023 (UTC)


 * You're not wrong. 84.216.129.214 (talk) 10:21, 30 July 2023 (UTC)