Talk:Pull-up (exercise)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 13:52, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Lede

 * supinated grip - this might need explaining.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:33, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Oh I see. A pull-up may be performed with overhand (pronated), underhand (supinated), neutral, or rotating hand position. The term chin-up is sometimes used to refer to the pull-up performed with supinated grip. - it's a bit odd to say that a pull-up can be done underarm, and then later say that it's called a chin-up. Should be merged.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:33, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done (t &#183; c)  buidhe  19:23, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Is "kinematics" the best name - not movement or technique or something?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:40, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Renamed (t &#183; c)  buidhe  09:15, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
 * I feel like the opening of the body should explain a bit more about what the pull-up is.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:40, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done (t &#183; c)  buidhe  08:54, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
 * There is a traditional belief that women are unable to complete a pull-up - this seems like such a ridiculously contentious statement it needs a ref.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:40, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * It's already supported by the cited source (p. 53): "It is unclear if other differences between men and women can account for the traditional belief in the inability of women to perform a pull-up." (t &#183; c)  buidhe  19:05, 31 October 2022 (UTC) NVM I just removed this sentence
 * As the "Guiness world records" is a brand name, can we not forgo the Guiness?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:40, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * If there are other world records worth mentioning that are recognized by a different organization, then I would support the change but right now it only covers Guinness world records. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  19:03, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * The table should have the names of the move in a separate column, preferably setup as rowscopes.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:40, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I'll move it to a separate column but I don't know how to do rowscopes. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  19:16, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

Review meta comments

 * I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 13:52, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi thanks for your review. I believe I've addressed all the points raised. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  09:15, 7 November 2022 (UTC)