Talk:Pulpotomy

Can an expert edit the sentences below to a more-professional level?
This is what we have currently:

''In some cases an adult tooth might have decay down to the pulp but the pulp is still pretty healthy. If the roots haven't finished forming yet, a partial pulpotomy might give it a chance to finish forming.''

This not only sounds like pop science but it is also written in an amateurish way. Can an expert please fix this and make it more professional? I can edit the above and rewrite it better, but I am not an expert in this topic.

Cheers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ArthurJomasSmith (talk • contribs) 16:06, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

External links modified
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I have just added archive links to 1 one external link on Pulpotomy. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20060621033320/http://www.aapd.org:80/members/referencemanual/pdfs/Pulp_Therapy.pdf to http://www.aapd.org/members/referencemanual/pdfs/Pulp_Therapy.pdf

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