Talk:Pumpkin bomb/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:32, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this in a little bit.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:32, 26 May 2013 (UTC)


 * Don't capitalize the 'P' in the caption
 * De-capped. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:30, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Add this to the lede to better explain their purpose right away: The pumpkin bomb was a close but non-nuclear replication of the Fat Man plutonium bomb with the same ballistic and handling characteristics. That same phrase is duplicated twice in the main body so clean that up.
 * Done and done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:30, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
 * The main problem is in paragraphs two through four in the development section.
 * Explain bomb shape or change it to just "bomb".
 * Typo: demonstrated that the Fat man
 * Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:30, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Typo: "on" 509th Composite Group in 20, 23, 26
 * Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:30, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Use an endash for page ranges, not a hyphen.
 * Groan. Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:30, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
 * The infobox says 6,000lbs of filler, but the description para says 6,300lbs.
 * Corrected to 6,300 lbs, per source.
 * You've got a fair number of overlinks.
 * It seems that the duplicate link checker is working again, so I have swept them up. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:30, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
 * No DABs and the pic is appropriately licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:36, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
 * All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:30, 27 May 2013 (UTC)