Talk:Pure Heroine Tour/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox
 * Please add ALT text for the infobox image.
 * I am not sure if the reference for the lead is necessary. References in the lead are usually reserved for controversial information, and I think that the part aobut the unreleased song should also be located and cited in the body of the article.


 * Background
 * Wikilink “Lorde” when you first mention her in the body of the article.
 * Remember to include ALT text for all of the images in the body of the article.
 * For this part (In an interview with Fuse), would it be possible to add a wikilink for “Fuse”? Is this a reference to Fuse (TV channel)?


 * Development
 * Everything looks good here.


 * Concert synopsis
 * For this part (The show was divided mainly into three parts.), I am uncertain if “mainly” is needed.
 * This part (The set included three screens of video that showed Lorde and her band.) needs a citation. The same comment applies to this part (She also cites her fear of aging as inspiration.).
 * For this part (was set in blue colors), maybe “shades of blue” would be better than “blue colors”.


 * Reception
 * Great work with this section.


 * Final comments
 * Wonderful work on this article. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to pass this. One day, I should really work on a tour article lol. Aoba47 (talk) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Went ahead and fixed the article. Thank you so much for reviewing this! You should try to do some tour articles. I initially thought they would be a nightmare to do but they proved to be quite easy. De88 (talk) 21:32, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Thank you for addressing everything! And maybe in the future. I will ✅ this though now lol. Aoba47 (talk) 21:34, 17 January 2019 (UTC)