Talk:Purupuruni/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:14, 14 March 2020 (UTC)

Comments
Please bear with me on this one, geology isn't my strong suit.

I see Geothermal field is a redlink. I'm surprised, this seems like a notable topic. However, given the lack of a page here, some users won't know what this is. Is there a section somewhere this could be linked to? Otherwise, a short description of what a geothermal field is might be helpful.
 * Yeah, I was kind of amazed myself that there wasn't a page. I took a look at the site search and didn't find anything that could be linked from. Even finding a source for a canned definition is hard. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

Geography and geomorphology - "48 kilometres (30 mi) north from the border with Chile" This might read better as "north of the border with Chile".
 * Aye, did that change. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

This is obviously etymology, but it's stuck in as a clause in a sentence about where the feature is located, this etymology probably needs some more context. It might also warrant its own sentence, so the topics aren't jammed together.
 * I've cut that sentence in two. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

"and isolated and little eroded." - "and are" maybe?
 * Done, but I wonder if there is a wording w/o the double "and". Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

Wikilink intrusions to the proper article (piped link to Intrusive rock possibly?). Not all readers are going to understand that term.
 * Added a link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

"The volcanism appear " - Probably should be "The volcanism appears"
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

" it is used in the Calachaca spa" - Is this a reference to Borateras? I corrected the capitalization at the start of the sentence.
 * Yes, rewrote this a bit. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

Will review the rest of the article later. Hog Farm (talk) 18:37, 14 March 2020 (UTC)

Geology

"Volcanic rocks include mainly andesite" - Unclear if you're referring to the volcanic rocks at this site or volcanic rocks in general, this should be clarified.
 * Clarified. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

"Purupuruni is considered to be part of this volcanic formation" - Which of the formations is this phrase referring to?
 * Clarified this too. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

Geologic history - "and appears to be of Pleistocene age." - The subject of this phrase is "volcanic centres", so the singular "appear" would seem to be better to me than the plural "appears" here.
 * Pluralized. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

Find a wikilink for "fluvial", not everyone's gonna know what this means. Sources look good, AGF on the print and non-English sources.
 * Link added. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

While not necessary, it would be nice if we could get an image of the formation, but not necessary. Is there a usable image on Commons somewhere?
 * Searched for one, didn't find anything. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)

Looks good overall, just these issues. Pinging nominator,. Hog Farm (talk) 23:00, 14 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Got these. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:37, 15 March 2020 (UTC)
 * - Passing for GA. Hog Farm (talk) 18:34, 15 March 2020 (UTC)