Talk:Pygmy three-toed sloth/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 01:23, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Comments by Dunkleosteus77

 * change "...and Charles O. Handley Jr. of..." to "...and Charles O. Handley Jr., of..."; there is always a comma after "jr."
 * change "...the three other members of its genus" to "...the other three members of its genus" (optional)
 * wikilink "brown-throated sloth"
 * change "...the three-toed sloths endemic to..." to "...the three-toed sloth is endemic to..."
 * Please re-read the sentence, that is not what I meant.


 * change "..due to rise in sea levels" to "...due to a rise in sea levels" or "...due to rises in sea levels"
 * , does this sloth have only six teeth?
 * Sloths lack incisors and canines, and according to the source the numbers in the formula are the sum of the number of premolars and molars.


 * wikilink "red mangrove" to Rhizophora mangle in the image caption
 * change "...population at 79 – 70 on mangroves..." to "...population at 70 – 79 on mangroves..." or "...population at 70 to 79 on mangroves..."
 * You appear to have misunderstood the endash, I have made it clearer anyway.


 * if this sloth lives on an island without predators, why would it need camouflage?
 * Interesting, but how do we know if the island has predators or not? Perhaps this was a trait it retained from the mainland brown-throated population. In any case, I have tried my best to add all information I could from such a limited number of sources.


 * change "...red mangrove leaves, that are..." to "...red mangrove leaves, which are..." or "...red mangrove leaves that are..."
 * for ref no. 17, use

Since this is a short article, that's all the comments I have.  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 01:23, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your efficient review. I have either fixed all the above or responded. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 06:01, 5 June 2016 (UTC)


 * It'll pass  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 17:16, 5 June 2016 (UTC)