Talk:Pyjama shark/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:19, 19 May 2010 (UTC)


 * "The pyjama shark is the larger and thicker-bodied member of the genus, growing to 1.1 m (3.6 ft) long and 7.9 kg (17 lb) or more in weight." This sentence confuses me, as what is it larger and thicker-bodied than?
 * Changed to "...thicker-bodied of the two Poroderma species"


 * Gurnard needs disambiguation.
 * Done.


 * Too bad, no picture.

Xtzou ( Talk ) 20:43, 19 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 23:29, 19 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good, though I am not a specialist in the field. I do understand and enjoy most of the article. Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:01, 20 May 2010 (UTC)

 GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality: Clearly written and concise
 * B. MoS compliance: Complies with basic  MoS
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources: Reliable sources
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Well referenced
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects: Sets the context
 * B. Focused: Remains focused on the topic
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!

Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:01, 20 May 2010 (UTC)