Talk:Pyotr Masherov/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Raymond Kestis (talk · contribs) 04:55, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be your GAN reviewer. I will be using the template below. Ray 04:55, 24 November 2022 (UTC)


 * @Mupper-san Ray 04:56, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
 * I also recommend not using words such as "faux pas" and "nom-de guerre" as the average reader doesn't know what those words mean. Replace it with terms in the English language. Ray 00:36, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Notify me when you fix the typos and grammar errors. Ray 23:39, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, I have made edits to typos, grammatical errors, and non-English terms. Please do let me know if there are any additional errors that I missed, as I'm more than happy to fix them.
 * Mupper-san (talk) 03:07, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
 * I suggest replacing "office of the dentist" to just "dentist's office".
 * Put commas after the year: "In September 1943, he was promoted [...]." Do the same with places. "In Brest, [...]." Ray 07:32, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Alright, I've fixed these issues within the article.
 * Mupper-san (talk) 17:06, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Change these sentences ("In Brest Masherov's activities were similar to [...].", "In Brest Masherov lived in what had formerly been [...].", and "Near Smalyavichy Masherov's vehicle suffered [...].")
 * to "In Brest, Masherov's activities were similar to [...].", "In Brest, Masherov lived in what had formerly been [...].", and "Near Smalyavichy, Masherov's vehicle suffered [...]." Other than that, your article is good. Ray 09:09, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Basically, add a comma after saying the place. Ray 13:32, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Ah, my apologies, it seems I forgot to do so beforehand. Regardless, it should now be fixed.
 * Mupper-san (talk) 16:30, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
 * I fixed the minor errors myself, passing the article now. Ray 02:41, 28 November 2022 (UTC)