Talk:Q27 (New York City bus)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 18:10, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement
Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  18:10, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * To note, I am aware that the nominator, Kew Gardens, is on holiday, so again I ping our friend to help out. – ♠Vami  _IV†♠  18:19, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Prose

 * line in Queens, New York City, United States, "United States" feels out of place here.
 * ✅ by --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * via that street [...] along that street Obliterate.
 * ✅ by --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Service on the route that became the Q27 service Delete the second "service"
 * ✅ by --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Service on the route that became the Q27 started in October 1928 by the Z & M Coach Corporation This should be "was started".
 * ✅ by --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * [...] as part of Zone B (Flushing and Northern Queens). Expand on this; elaborate on the division of NYC into these zones.
 * ✅ by --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * New York City granted While technically correct, this makes it sounds like the whole city was in on the granting.
 * ✅ by --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * its former routes being turned over to city operation and its former routes were turned over to city operation.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * that New York City Transit Replace with "the NYCTA"
 * After 1994, it become publicly known as New York City Transit.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)