Talk:QOR360

COI Disclosure Statement
I work for WhiteHatWiki.com, which was hired by the subject of the article. I have rewritten a previous page that was deleted because the user was suspected to have been banned from Wikipedia as sock. This is my only account and I have never had another. The ethos of WhiteHatWiki is strictly abiding by Wikipedia policies (“white hat”), especially disclosure of conflict of interest. Aside from disclosure, I have tried to abide by NPOV, RS, Verify and other policies. As this page is about a product, whose notability is based on product reviews, I tried to be very sensitive to WP: PROMO. W12SW77 (talk) 20:46, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

AfC back and forth
Moving these notes from the Draft per note from @W12SW77 on my Talk as, to their point, the sock questions have been resolved sufficiently and these comments are not helpful to a future AfC reviewer but might be helpful for overall context in terms of the draft's history W12, let me know if this works for you? Star  Mississippi  00:21, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

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Suggested edits for February 2024
I’d like to suggest edits to this article to address complaints of possible promotional language flagged on the top of the page, as well as one structural issue. I work for WhiteHatWiki, which was hired by the subject of this article.

First request

Please move the current fourth sentence of the History section to become the new first sentence of the History section.

Along with his son, Lex, Osler founded QOR360 in 2016.

Reason for the change:

Sets the stage for a more standard company History section, placing the founding date above the origin story.

Second request

Please replace what should now be the fourth sentence in the History section.

From:

Osler said he conceived his own design after he was unable to find an affordable ergonomic chair that alleviated his back pain.

To:

Osler said he conceived his own design after he was unable to find an affordable ergonomic chair.

Reason:

As written, the sentence could be interpreted as claiming that Osler’s chair will alleviate back pain. This would be a biomedical claim based on Osler’s experience, not peer-reviewed research.


 * Done, seems reasonable Ldm1954 (talk) 05:07, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Third request

Please replace the first sentence in the Product section.

From:

The chairs are designed around a feature Osler patented as RedRocker technology; a dome-shaped rubber piece beneath the seat that allows it to wobble and pivot.

To:

The chairs are designed around a dome-shaped rubber piece beneath the seat that allows it to wobble and pivot.

Reason:

The suggested replacement removes branding language that is unnecessary to convey the information.

Fourth request

Please replace the second paragraph of the Product section.

From:

In 2022 QOR360 designed a chair called the ButtOn, that is intended for use in classrooms and be constructed using free, downloadable plans.

To:

In 2022 QOR360 designed a chair for use in classrooms that can be constructed using free, downloadable plans.

Reason:

The suggested replacement removes branding language that is unnecessary to convey the information.


 * Done, seems reasonable Ldm1954 (talk) 05:07, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Fifth request

Please remove the flag from the top of the page.

Reason:

The proposed edits have removed possibly promotional content, the reason for the flag.

Thanks for your time and assistance. W12SW77 (talk) 16:25, 2 February 2024 (UTC) W12SW77 (talk) 16:25, 2 February 2024 (UTC)


 * Not done, it still reads like advertising and also may not meet notability.


 * No. This article is better off deleted. Quetstar (talk) 02:49, 30 April 2024 (UTC)

Notability
This is a new article (albeit a bit long in the tooth), so I looked at it as part of NPP. Tricky because of the prior deletion & COI. Also tricky because if it had not been designed by a retired trauma surgeon I doubt it would have received coverage. (Consider if it had been designed by an art student or an accountant.)

Proofs of notability might be massive sales, strong reviews in independent articles, industry awards or similar. All I could find was a scathing review in wired magazine. Ldm1954 (talk) 05:29, 14 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks for taking the time to look over the proposed edits to QOR360. As a declared paid editor, I appreciate that you’re a volunteer and I value your work. But I disagree with your reading of Wikipedia’s Notability guidelines for companies and hope you’ll reconsider the tag you added to the top of the page. Do you have time to discuss?
 * Your explanation of Notability here is so at loggerheads with Wikipedia policy for companies found at WP:NCORP. You’ve articulated a whole series of criteria for notability of a page about a company/product that judge a company on its merits rather than its significant press coverage. This is in complete conflict with the actual Wikipedia Notability policy.
 * You write that “Proofs of notability might be massive sales, strong reviews in independent articles, industry awards or similar.” However, per WP:ORGCRITE: A company, corporation, organization, group, product, or service is presumed notable if it has been the subject of significant coverage in multiple reliable secondary sources that are independent of the subject. There is no assessment on the merits of a company (in stark contrast to other language editions of Wikipedia, such as the German, which assess companies based on objective statistics such as their revenue, number of employees, etc.)
 * QOR360 was already reviewed and approved at WP:AFC by User:Ca because it easily satisfies the Notability requirements based on significant press coverage. See WP:ORGCRITE:
 * The company was profiled in a 2020 article in the Wall Street Journal; a 2020 article in the Boston Globe; a 2022 feature story on WBUR in Boston; a 2022 article in the Addison Independent; a 2019 article in the Burlington Free Press; and a 2021 article in the Milton Independent.
 * The company also received coverage in a 2022 article in the Financial Times; and a 2023 article in the Wall Street Journal.
 * While sales and strong reviews may be what attracts the interest of journalists and drives press coverage, they are not criteria for establishing Notability on Wikipedia.
 * Also please take another look at the Wired review you cited. The product review in Wired that you characterize as “scathing” is actually a very positive review of the chair, which the reviewer noted took time to get used to. Ultimately the reviewer deemed the chair “great for easing back pain” and concluded: “After a week of gradually increasing the length of time, my back pain started to disappear, and I felt my posture improve whenever I was away from my desk.”
 * Regardless, it’s a review from a major publication, which further adds to notability of the page - there’s no part of WP: PRODUCTREV that says a review must be positive to help establish notability. The reviews must be significant, independent and in editorially credible publications.
 * Furthermore, you write: “If the chair had not been designed by an ex trauma surgeon it is not clear that it would have been covered in articles.”
 * Whether the company would’ve been covered in articles were it not for the founder being a trauma surgeon is a hypothetical outside the bounds of Wikipedia policy. Under NCORP what matters is that the story has significant coverage, the reporter is independent, and the publication has a reputation for editorial credibility. NCORP does not include an assessment of what aspects of a subject attracted an independent reporter to write a story.
 * You also say: “Nothing here seems to be more than advertising.” The content and language on the page is in line with Good Articles mostly about products such as Proactiv, Heat (perfume), and SpaceX.
 * Your assessment that the page is largely advertising, despite its language being neutral (not even paraphrasing the many positive reviews) suggests that you may think any Wikipedia page written about a company product is inherently advertising. This is not the case as not only are there many GAs about products. WP:NCORP even has specific criteria that make it possible to qualify a page about a product based entirely on product reviews.
 * It would be helpful if you would identify specific language or sentences that you think violate WP:PROMO so we can address any issues you see. That’s the point of Tagging - to encourage pages with problems to be improved. Tags are specifically prohibited from beijing punitive.
 * I already posted a Request Edit at suggested changes in an effort to fix any possible small issues with NPOV. You accepted some of these changes. WP:PROMO.
 * I hope some of the above points will encourage a re-evaluation on your part and that you will remove the tags.
 * Thanks for your time. W12SW77 (talk) 18:21, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * @W12SW77 @Ldm1954 This page looks notable. Some parts of this may do well with rephrasing for neutrality. However, it has been covered by numerous reliable sources which are cited and focus clearly on the topic at hand. Because of this, I find this article notable, but I suggest that parts of it be rewritten. Thanks, Neuropol  Talk  18:55, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for taking the time to review the page. I would be happy to do the revisions you suggested. Would you mind pointing me in the right direction? What language should I focus on? Thanks again.
 * Do you have any feedback based on Neuropol’s remarks?
 * W12SW77 (talk) 12:16, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Reply to both Neuropol and W12SW77: please note the prior refusal to make changes by Quetstar on April 30th 2024 who commented "This article is better off deleted". There already was a third opinion which was harsher than my adding a tag, and also after I declined to make changes. The comments by Neuropol are a fourth opinion.
 * Also, please do not provide misinformation. You claim that the wired article is positive, but the concluding sentence is After testing several active chairs, the Ariel 1.0 was the one that felt most effective, but there's a good chance you don't really need it. Saying that the chair is not needed is not a positive review. Ldm1954 (talk) 12:43, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I think the tone of the whole article could be more encyclopedic. As an example, "Osler spent up to 60 hours a week sitting and claimed to develop back pain as a result" seems somewhat dubious to me. Thanks, Neuropol  Talk  12:51, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

Request made for third opinion
A request has been made via WP:3O for a third editor to weigh in on a discussion of Notability. W12SW77 (talk) 13:37, 8 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Based on your feedback, how about cutting down the length of the origin story and re-arranging it so the founding date comes first? This would be the entire History section:
 * QOR360 was founded in 2016 by Turner Osler, a former surgeon, and his son, Lex. Osler said he conceived the initial design after being unable to find an affordable ergonomic chair to address his back pain. In 2022 the Financial Times reported that the increase in working from home during the COVID-19 pandemic
 * resulted in increased sales of the chairs.
 * Thanks for taking a look.W12SW77 (talk) 16:00, 13 May 2024 (UTC) W12SW77 (talk) 16:00, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Sure, though I recommend adding a comma here: "In 2022, the Financial Times..." I may tweak further later as well, but that should be good for now. Thanks, Neuropol  Talk  16:04, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback. I agree about the comma. If you’re good with the following, are you able to implement the edit to become the new History section? I won’t make any direct edits due to my COI.
 * QOR360 was founded in 2016 by Turner Osler, a former surgeon, and his son, Lex. Osler said he conceived the initial design after being unable to find an affordable ergonomic chair to address his back pain. In 2022 the Financial Times reported that the increase in working from home during the COVID-19 pandemic
 * resulted in increased sales of the chairs.
 * I believe this edit should address any outstanding concerns over language that reads like advertising. Thanks again for all of your feedback.W12SW77 (talk) 17:32, 17 May 2024 (UTC) W12SW77 (talk) 17:32, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Sounds good.
 * @Ldm1954 Do you have any more comments to make about this dispute on your behalf before I go ahead and implement these changes? Thanks, Neuropol  Talk  17:36, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Since there doesn’t appear to be further comment, are you good to implement the changes? Thanks again for reviewing.W12SW77 (talk) 13:18, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I just wanted to put this back on your radar. If there’s anything else I can do to improve the page before you implement the changes, please let me know. ThanksW12SW77 (talk) 18:18, 21 June 2024 (UTC)