Talk:Qasr al-Hayr al-Sharqi

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Evaluation

 * Points: 3
 * Grade: B

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations A few minor grammar problems, verb tenses chnages and missing prepositions.

Language
Meets Expectations Apparently and seem to be, should be taken out and replaced. They don't follow an encyclopedic tone. They are speculative, not definite. Its also a bit choppy in some of the paragraphs, they read as just a list of unrelated facts instead of as an encyclopedia entry.

Organization
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Coding
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Completion
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