Talk:Que Alguien Me Diga/GA1

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:58, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

There are some minor copy adjustments and that's almost it. Please watch your quote fidelity, which I spotted in [1]. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:58, 23 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks Sammi! I fixed all the issues brought up. Erick (talk) 15:32, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * Several composers contributed to album's songwriting including Omar Alfanno who penned the track "Que Alguien Me Diga". Needs a "the" after "to". I'd like to see commas after "songwriting" and "Alfanno", as this actually has nested appositives.
 * It also received a nomination at the 2000 El Premio de la Gente in the category of Song of the Year; but again lost to "A Puro Dolor". Remove the semicolon, as "but again lost to..." is not a standalone sentence. A comma would also be inappropriate.
 * It was adopted in English Probably "adapted"

Spot checks

 * 1: The quote is slightly inaccurate, which must be fixed.
 * Article: "combination of salsa with a mix of modern sounds"
 * Story: combination of "classic salsa with a mix of modern sounds"
 * 3: AllMusic lists Alfanno as the writer for this song. ✅
 * 10: PRNewswire press release but for the winners at the Latino Music Awards. The reference data needs to make clear this is a press release. I would accept this for the list of winners and for "A Puro Dolor" winning in Song of the Year. ✅
 * 15: Billboard The Year in Music charts. Album is listed as second in both listed areas. ✅
 * 18: Inclusion of song and Alfanno having composed all tracks. ✅

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