Talk:Queen Camilla/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MSincccc (talk · contribs) 09:39, 25 December 2023 (UTC)

Prose and summary style
The GA reviewer has asked me to take a look at the 1a and 3b aspects. From a quick buzz through the article I'd say the summary style used is actually quite good, with not as much detail as some of the other articles. As for prose, as usual I recommend removing commas after dates when not a parenthetical clause; merging some short paragraphs; and fixing false titles and complying with MOS:JOB (example: "First Lady of Ukraine Olena Zelenska" would become "the first lady of Ukraine, Olena Zelenska"). Tim O&#39;Doherty (talk) 17:22, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Well, it's always good to have a second pair of eyes going through everything. I will go through the article myself later today and apply these suggestions. Will update you guys once it's done. Keivan.f  Talk 19:24, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
 * @Keivan.f and @Tim O'Doherty I have verified the date styles in British English. Its like "In November 2023,... or "In November 2023 ..." both will do but in a case like "On 3 April 2019," the comma is significant and needs to be used. "In 2020" is not usually succeeded by a comma. I hope I have made myself clear. Regards MSincccc (talk) 06:47, 6 January 2024 (UTC)
 * I'm not British so I don't know if it's just a matter of preference or something that needs to be strictly followed. This article says for British English no commas should be used; ex. On 13 May 2007 Daniel was born is correct but On 13 May, 2007, Daniel was born is incorrect. The Oxford Style Guide did not contain any info on how to use dates and commas together, only clarifying that it should be 13 April instead of April 13 in British English. I will leave this part for later and instead focus on the other suggestions for the time being. Keivan.f  Talk 07:15, 6 January 2024 (UTC)
 * @Keivan.f This is what I meant:
 * On 13 May 2007, Daniel was born- Most accurate
 * In May 2007, Daniel was born or In May 2007 Daniel was born-Both are equally correct.
 * In 2007 Daniel was born- Most accurate.
 * I am fine with the writing styles on other articles. Just ensuring through this whether this is the way things are written in Camilla's article. After all, we need consistency in the article. By the way, I use Oxford style English in my school and textbooks. So I know after verifying with the teachers.

MSincccc (talk) 07:41, 6 January 2024 (UTC)