Talk:Quests in Middle-earth/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:39, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Lots of duplinks found using the usual tool.
 * Removed.


 * "into a quest" should be "on a quest"
 * Done.


 * "Half-elf" Elf should be capitalized?
 * Done.


 * 'Frodo "goes with the pain of a sad but noble decision"' doesn't parallel the structure of the earlier clause ("Bilbo's... venal motives"). It would sound better if it did.
 * Fixed.


 * The images are all licensed and used correctly.
 * Noted.


 * Just as a compliment, the article is very nicely illustrated; the medieval illustrations are used particularly well for the more abstract points.
 * Thank you!


 * The sources are all reliable and formatted correctly.
 * Spotchecks:
 * Birns, Nicholas (2012). "'You Have Grown Very Much': The Scouring of the Shire and the Novelistic Aspects of The Lord of the Rings". Journal of the Fantastic in the Arts. Verifies all claims made.
 * Hirsch, Bernhard (2014). "After the "end of all things": The Long Return Home to the Shire". Tolkien Studies. Verifies all claims made.
 * Moore, Clare (2022). "Goddess and Mortal: The Celtic and the French Morgan le Fay in Tolkien's Silmarillion". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
 * Overall a great article that has just a couple minor prose issues. AryKun (talk) 14:45, 25 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:03, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Okay, will be passing the article. AryKun (talk) 15:10, 25 July 2023 (UTC)