Talk:Quién (Ricardo Arjona song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 01:37, 23 December 2012 (UTC)


 * " The song was written by Arjona, and its music was composed by Puerto Rican singer-songwriter Tommy Torres" - what's the difference between written and composed? And produced?
 * Written is about the lyrics, composed is about the melody, and produced is about the actual making of the sounds.
 * Can you clarify that? --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:57, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
 * "who also worked with Arjona on Adentro" - I think you should clarify Adentro is an album.
 * Done.
 * "and was recorded between five studios in the city of Miami." - shouldn't this also mention the Mexico City session?
 * Oh yes. Done.
 * "Categorized by Arjona as "the world out of the window and the prison built by ourselves"" - I don't think "categorized" is the appropriate term here. Maybe "described"?
 * Done.
 * "In a press conference, Arjona stated that "yesterday is the cumulus of this that put us here, which raised us and made us what we are, for good or bad." - what is this in reference to? When was that?
 * Explained.
 * ""Se Nos Muere El Amor"" - since this is a quote within a quote, it should be like this - 'Se Nos Muere El Amor'
 * Done.
 * " is now with piano and flauta" - perhaps say [flute] instead of flauta, since it's the English language Wiki?
 * Omg yes.
 * The background section goes into a lot of detail on stuff about the album, but not the song. Try cutting out the info that isn't related to the song.
 * The album and song production came together, and specific info about the song, separate from the album is not available :(
 * "After spending the majority of his career signed to Sony, and later, Sony BMG, Arjona signed a long-term recording deal with Warner Music Latina in September 2008.[3] Iñigo Zabala, chairman of Warner Music Latin America commented that "He's an artist that fits perfectly with our company."[3] This departure made Quien Dijo Ayer the last album the artist directly released on his former label, although Sony later released another album named Simplemente Lo Mejor.[4]" - I think this is a bit superfluous to the song itself, since that's more album info. Given that this song was one of a few that was made for the album, it's not that pertinent to include it here. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:57, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
 * "The song was produced by Lee Levin, Dan Warner and Torres with additional help from Arjona." - is there any more role on what they did? What did they produce, exactly?
 * I guess I answered this above: They produced the actual sounds; nothing else is stated.
 * Nowhere does it mention all of the instruments on the song, and who plays what, aside from the vocals.
 * It is done on the personnel section.
 * I meant in prose. Better now. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 16:57, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Could you get a source for the Youtube hits aside from the link itself? It's not working for me.
 * Nope. Not in any other source...

All in all, the article is pretty short and could use more info. It's on hold for now. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 01:37, 23 December 2012 (UTC)