Talk:Quincy McKnight/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:14, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:32, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "won a diocesan championship" what's one of those?
 * It's a championship for his Catholic diocese. How do you propose I phrase that? ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "become better at basketball going forward" going forward feels redundant. He couldn't do it any other direction.
 * Removed "going forward." ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Connecticut and" comma after Connecticut.
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Is there a link for "points per game", like Points per game?
 * Linked. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "to The Phelps School, where" no comma required.
 * Removed. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "honor roll performer" what's one of those?
 * Added "academically" to clarify. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "4.2 rebounds, and 3.5 assists per game" links for rebounds and assists?
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "2015 Jordan Brand Classic Regional Game" is this a big deal?
 * Yes, it is, and worthy of mention. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * What's PAISSA?
 * Changed to simply "state championship". ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "lightly recruited, being regarded as a two-star recruit" recruited/recruit repetitive and what does "lightly recruited" mean?
 * It means not many schools offered him a scholarship. This is a common enough phrase and I don't think it needs to be changed. I did reword "recruit" to "prospect" however. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "play college basketball for" link that again here.
 * I'm assuming you mean "college basketball." ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "triple-overtime" link?
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * " 1.6 steals" link?
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "free throws" link?
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "listed as day-to-day" what?
 * It's what his condition was considered. What do you propose? ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "with the 7th pick" seventh.
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Would be nice if the table complied with MOS:DTT for row and col scopes but not a GA requirement.
 * Honestly, I have no idea how to do this, but feel free to take a stab. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * What does "Redshirt" mean??
 * Provided a link. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Ref 10 - SHOUTING.
 * Changed to lowercase. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I have responded to all your points. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)