Talk:Quincy Miller/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 13:38, 24 March 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * A few points:
 * When you first mention his sister's death, it might be good to explain briefly that she died in a car accident -- we don't learn what the deal was until the end of the article.
 * I moved the sister's death entirely to the personal section rather than the high school basketball section.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:53, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
 * In the fourth paragraph of "High school career," the word "guys" is kind of slang-y. I'd say "young men" or "players".
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:53, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Plenty of refs, but is the citation to Twitter appropriate?
 * I have formatted the ref to formalize that these are the nicknames that he proclaims. Is that sufficient? Removable upon request.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:59, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Fine with me. --Coemgenus (talk) 16:21, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * No problems here.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Seems NPOV to me.
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * None.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * None used, likely none available.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: