Talk:Quintonil/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 20:28, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: TrademarkedTWOrantula (talk · contribs) 15:47, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Snatch! TWOrantula TM (enter the web) 15:47, 1 July 2024 (UTC)


 * @Tbhotch: Finished.  TWOrantula  TM (enter the web) 01:36, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

Quickfail?

 * ✅ Article is stable.
 * ✅ Earwig top result: 24.8%. No severe copyright violations.
 * ✅ No mistakes in previous GA reviews to note.
 * ✅ No cleanup banners or citation needed tags.
 * ✅ No glaring errors.


 * Comment
 * I think this sentence should be moved to the Description section: "It has volcanic stone floors and wood and mirrored walls." --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:25, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
 * That's a good idea.  TWOrantula  TM (enter the web) 14:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Lead

 * daily menu restaurant - As in the restaurant's menu is changed every day?
 * Yes. Does a term exist in English? Because I only found Menú del día


 * that are uncommon to taste in dishes - Tried rewording it to "that are uncommon in dishes". That correct?
 * Could remove the citation. The fact is cited later in the article.
 * Removed

Description

 * "are brought" -> "are sourced"?
 * Changed


 * Should there be a separate section for the gallery?
 * Dishes include common ingredients like beans, squash, various chiles, and mushrooms - So like, the ingredients are dishes by themselves?
 * Reworded, I think.


 * A variation of the Mole Madre sold at Pujol is also available. - Not sure why this is mentioned if the reader doesn't know what the dish is.
 * I linked it to the mole itself


 * The wine menu is mainly European, with Mexican variants, - Does that mean the wine mostly comes from Europe?
 * Are the Mexican beverages on the wine menu?
 * Reworded, I think, for both.


 * Was the Entomophagy Festival a one-time thing? If so, when did it happen?
 * but business casual is commonly seen - Seems travel guide-esque or like a piece of advice you're trying to give to the reader. Should this be removed?
 * I removed the statement.

History

 * Not sure why we need a link to "high school"
 * and they became a couple - Kinda feels awkward and unnecessary to squeeze this detail in. It doesn't sound right to me.
 * Cut "according to them"
 * into their homes like friends - Don't you mean neighbors?
 * Reworded, for these three points.


 * they even lived on the second floor of the restaurant for five years - I'm not sure if this is what directly inspired them to open a restaurant with a "family concept". It seems like trivia to me.
 * contribute to the menus with their reimagining of Quintonil's recipes -> "...provide new dishes"?
 * Reworded

Reception

 * infrequent vegetables and herbs - What?
 * Tried replacing the Bon Appetit sentence with an actual quote from the source. Not sure if that works.
 * Shouldn't the Restaurant magazine ranks go in chronological order?

Spotchecking

 * Five sources. Go! (References of this revision.)
 * #6 ❌ - Neither this source nor #7 mentions the nine-course tasting menu or the a la carte menu.
 * #10 ✅ ✅ ✅
 * #18 ❌ - Doesn't really mention the "cooking style" part
 * #25 ✅
 * #29 ✅
 * Changed and reworded. (CC) Tb hotch ™ 03:35, 5 July 2024 (UTC)