Talk:R.I.P. (Rita Ora song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:37, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

This is a childhood favourite of mine, so I take pride in reviewing it! --K. Peake 08:37, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Pipe Stargate to Stargate (record producers) under producers in the infobox
 * Move the release stuff to a separate sentence directly after the writing and production one
 * Remove wikilink on studio album
 * I'm not sure about Chase & Status and Stargate being linked before their production mentions in prose since that is different from separate infobox parameters, also pipe to Stargate (record producers) instead
 * Removed the links, are you fine with that? Iaof2017 (talk) 10:29, 11 October 2022 (UTC)


 * For the sampling part, cut down to only mention the duo by name with no wikilink and remove the release year of the single plus other intro
 * Mention after the United Kingdom position that it was her second number-one on the UK Singles Chart with the wikilink
 * Split the other countries into a separate sentence, also change this to mentioning it reached the top 50 in ones among others since top 100 is not notable for the lead of a song that was number one in certain regions
 * Mention that the Bubbling Under Hot 100 is a Billboard chart
 * Add the name of the Denmark certification organization, also this needs to be mentioned in the body like anything in the lead
 * Remove "for "R.I.P."" because the term accompanying implies the music video was for the song
 * Remove the United Kingdom after East London since everyone knows where the city is
 * "depicts Ora and Tempah" → "depicts Ora and Tinie Tempah" because this is not his real name
 * "she performed the song at several occasions," → "she performed "R.I.P." on several occasions,"
 * "among other for the" → "including the award of"

Background and composition

 * Same concern as before about linking to Chase & Status and Stargate before they are mentioned, also pipe to Stargate (record producers)
 * The source does not actually say that it was intended for Rihanna
 * "was not written for Rihanna." → "wasn't written for Rihanna." per the source's wording
 * Try to add some background info, like what led to Tinie Tempah, Chase & Status or any other collaborators working on this
 * Done. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 11 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "Several remixes, including by" → "Several remixes, which were done by" because these are the only ones sourced
 * "on 28 August." → "on 28 August 2012."
 * ""R.I.P." is a" → "Musically, "R.I.P." is a"

Reception

 * "garnered mixed to positive reception" → "was met with mixed to positive reviews"
 * "between Ora and Tempah" → "between Ora and Tinie Tempah"
 * "Rihanna-collaborating British softies."" → "Rihanna-collaborating British softies"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "wrote that "if she's" → "wrote, "If [Ora]'s"
 * "our own high tops." → "our own high tops."" to end the full sentence quoted
 * "stating that "it's still a" → "stating, "It's still a"
 * "decryed the song's lyrics" → "decried the song's lyrics"
 * "in the country." → "in the United Kingdom."
 * "and similarly received a platinum certification" → "and also received a platinum certification"
 * "also entered the chart in New Zealand and reached" → "also charted in New Zealand, reaching" and mention the chart by name specifically
 * "In the United States," → "In the US," per MOS:US
 * Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
 * "and number 3 on" → "and number three on" per MOS:NUM
 * I think the awards would be better wrote out in prose instead straight after the reviews since four is not really enough for a table

Promotion

 * Retitle to Music video and promotion, as the first para is quite large
 * Img looks good!
 * Remove United Kingdom after East London because everyone knows where the city is
 * "The video begins with" → "It begins with"
 * "through a moderate-lighted surrounding," → "through a moderately-lit surrounding," to be less tedious with the following prose
 * "Tempah is standing next" → "Tinie Tempah is standing next"
 * "agains a dark grey setting." → "against a dark grey setting."
 * "beanie collection," further" → "beanie collection", further" per MOS:QUOTE
 * "and Tempah's appearance, writing that "not much goes on in the video" → "and Tinie Tempah's appearance in the video, writing that "not much goes on [...]"
 * "looking exceptionally hot,"" → "looking exceptionally hot","
 * "watch them be hot."" → "watch them be hot"."
 * Idolator should not be italicised
 * "cribbing song itself."" → "cribbing song itself"."
 * "for American rapper" → "for Canadian musician" per his correct identity
 * "on Late Show with David Letterman" → "on the Late Show with David Letterman"
 * Pipe acoustic to Acoustic music
 * Remove wikilink on MTV

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Don't you have the necessary details to create this section?

Weekly charts

 * Wikilink Euro Digital Song Sales to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT

Year-end charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that went smoothly! --K. Peake 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Heyy . Massive thanks to you for picking up this review. I believe I addressed all of your concerns. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:07, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I like how you have left comments for specific issues and I did some copy editing to help out in a few areas too! --K. Peake 11:27, 11 October 2022 (UTC)