Talk:R. Stevie Moore/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 18:56, 14 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Hi, I'll review this soon. I saw him play a few years ago. FunkMonk (talk) 18:56, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I think the author information on the infobox picture seems suspicious. You have one person listed as a photographer, but the username of the uploader is another given name.
 * ✅ Replaced image --Ilovetopaint (talk) 00:53, 18 February 2018 (UTC)


 * What's his mom's name, and what did she do? Seems like pretty standard info for a bio.
 * ❌ I found that sources mention nothing specific about his mother --Ilovetopaint (talk) 00:53, 18 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Why is Phonography and other albums listed under compilations? According to what? Could be good to put a source somewhere.
 * I'm not sure I understand the question. Those are all officially released compilations, which is why they are listed under "compilations". Whereas the "official studio albums" consist of new material recorded specially for a label. --Ilovetopaint (talk) 00:53, 18 February 2018 (UTC)
 * But in what way is Phonography (album) a compilation? It's article says no such thing. So what is this label based on? FunkMonk (talk) 01:36, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Phonography did not consist of new material recorded specially for a label. It was a mixtape created by Harry Palmer and pressed to vinyl. All of Moore's compilations are curated in that way.


 * Source --Ilovetopaint (talk) 18:43, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * That's kind of interesting, worth noting in the article then. FunkMonk (talk) 18:59, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ although I thought this was already clarified under "Discography".--Ilovetopaint (talk) 04:30, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Oh, I meant the information that is alluded to in the quote. FunkMonk (talk) 04:52, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Seems this is the last remaining issue. FunkMonk (talk) 14:55, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure if you're asking for the entire quote to be included - I thought I had added the relevant info two weeks ago --Ilovetopaint (talk) 13:39, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
 * No, I mean the fact that his first album was compiled by his uncle. It is interesting to note, since it seems his uncle pushed him into getting anywhere. FunkMonk (talk) 16:10, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
 * It's there --Ilovetopaint (talk) 23:20, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Alright, you didn't announce here that you had made the change, tough. FunkMonk (talk) 23:24, 5 March 2018 (UTC)


 * "He continued to produce music and play gigs" It's always good to name the subject at the beginning of a new section.
 * ✅--Ilovetopaint (talk) 00:53, 18 February 2018 (UTC)


 * It would be normal practice to stay somewhere if he has a spouse or kids.
 * ❌ Would have added those details if I came across them in the sources.--Ilovetopaint (talk) 00:53, 18 February 2018 (UTC)


 * No word on music videos? Or at least that there seem to be promo-videos of some sort from the Uncle Floyd Show.
 * I'm not sure he's ever had a real music video, just home movies and public-access television appearances.--Ilovetopaint (talk) 00:53, 18 February 2018 (UTC)
 * No sources go into those?FunkMonk (talk) 01:46, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
 * No, and I've never stumbled upon any on YouTube.--Ilovetopaint (talk) 18:43, 19 February 2018 (UTC)


 * "'60s-inspired power pop in the XTC vein," The intro should not have unique info.
 * "which contain many of his most popular songs." Likewise.
 * "who frequently praised Moore as his "mentor" Likewise.
 * ✅ all above--Ilovetopaint (talk) 00:53, 18 February 2018 (UTC)


 * This looks good to me now, so will pass it. FunkMonk (talk) 23:24, 5 March 2018 (UTC)