Talk:RAF Eastcote/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (talk · contribs) 00:28, 9 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Why isn't "RAF Lime Grove, HMS Pembroke V and Outstation Eastcote" placed in bold face as well?
 * This has been changed.
 * Link D-day.
 * This has been done.
 * "At the end of the war, the outstation closed soon after" --> "The outstation closed soon after the war"?
 * This has been changed.
 * "from the owners, Telling Brothers." are they a company, or should "brothers" be decapped?
 * Telling Brothers was the name of the company.
 * What are "Bombes"? And "Crown"?
 * Bombes were one of the types of computer used for codebreaking, they are introduced two paragraphs previously. The "Crown" is a term used to describe purchases made by the British Government on behalf of the Queen.
 * Where is the acronym for United States Air Force? Link USAFE, Third Air Force, 7th Air Division, and SAC. BTW, why's "SAC" in parenthesis?
 * The USAFE acronym is in the lead. SAC is presented as it was in the source I used. The links have been added.
 * Link London Borough of Hillingdon
 * This is already linked in the lead.
 * ISBN for Copeland's publication?
 * This has been added.
 * Is there something wrong with the third publication in the bibliography?
 * Not that I can see. It is an individually authored chapter within a book.
 * Add alt text to photos please.
 * These have been added.
 * Footnotes 9 and 10 have changed paths, please update.
 * Both have been updated.


 * Thank you for your review. I've made the changes you have suggested. Harrison49 (talk) 18:40, 9 October 2011 (UTC)


 * TBH, I think some of the paragraphs are a bit chopped up, but generally, the article meets WP:WIAGA, so I'm passing the article. Sp33dyphil © • © 04:41, 12 October 2011 (UTC)