Talk:RAF West Ruislip/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:27, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * I'm confused about the early history. So the Air Ministry leased the property from Hilliard? This needs to be clarified in the article.
 * That's better. But it seems that the land was first used for the depot later moved to Didcot; is that right? Did the Air Ministry lease the land at that time from Hilliard?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:52, 23 October 2011 (UTC)
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Thanks for your review. I've added an extra sentence to the first paragraph of the History section which hopefully clarifies things. Harrison49 (talk) 21:50, 23 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I've added extra information. It's unclear whether the Air Ministry leased the land, only that compensation was paid eventually. Harrison49 (talk) 19:20, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
 * That's much clearer.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:46, 26 October 2011 (UTC)