Talk:Raúl Alfonsín/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:05, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi old friend! Will review this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 15:05, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 18:45, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Added all my comments below: Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Merge the first two paras, they look too short.
 * I think we should link "writ" and "Self-amnesty". In the main text as well.
 * Carlos Menem is linked twice
 *  full stop law and the law of Due Obedience No italics needed

Early life and career

 * Alfonsín was born I would like to have the main text begin with his full name
 * Can Buenos Aires be linked?
 * Following his elementary schooling Not clear if "his" refers to the father or the son
 * Alfonsín bought a local newspaper (El Imparcial) I am sure you refer to the company and not that he picked up one from a stall. Can be clearly worded
 * La Plata is linked twice.

Presidential campaign

 * the slogan "Ahora Alfonsín" In which language is this? And what does it mean?
 *  the Plaza de la República No italics needed
 *  in clean elections Meaning?

First days

 * Duplink: Peronism

Aftermath of the Dirty War

 * You say "Dirty War" at places, and "dirty war" elsewhere. We need consistency throughout the article
 * Full stop law and Law of Due Obedience don't need italics
 * Duplinks: Mothers of the Plaza de Mayo, Jorge Videla, Emilio Massera, Leopoldo Galtieri, Enrique Gorriarán Merlo

Social policies

 * Duplink: University of Buenos Aires

Foreign policy

 * Duplink: Pope John Paul II

Economic policy

 * Duplink: Bernardo Grinspun
 * There is a clarification needed template
 * Link gross domestic product

Midterm elections

 * No source for the first para?

Later years

 * There are some clarification and citation needed templates.
 * Source for the 5th para?
 * support anyway "anyway" looks informal.
 * Duplinks: Buenos Aires, Casa Rosada

Death

 * started a Candlelight vigil. No caps for "C"
 * Duplinks: María Lorenza, Barreneche Carlos Menem, Eduardo Duhalde, Néstor Kirchner

Legacy

 * Duplinks: Pact of Olivos, Ricardo Alfonsín
 *  son, Ricardo Alfonsín Comma not needed
 * This latter award  "The" not "this"

That should be all. These done, I would be happy to promote this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Done, but I kept "Plaza de la República" in italics, per MOS:FOREIGNITALIC. Cambalachero (talk) 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I believe this article can be promoted now. Great job! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 19:01, 1 April 2016 (UTC)